for Silent Rapsody12/30/2008 c2 Dusty Mirror 08
Yo, CJ!
I was starting to miss this fic ;) Good thing you continued it! I really don't have anything to critic...well, except one minor thing. I had an accident with an earring some days ago, and even though I don't have my ear pierced, it didn't bleed so much. But please, if you do know the ears, in fact, bleed as much as you say, don't mind me at all.
...also, you win for the mention of Loveless xDD.
Keep up the good work and update soon!.
Yo, CJ!
I was starting to miss this fic ;) Good thing you continued it! I really don't have anything to critic...well, except one minor thing. I had an accident with an earring some days ago, and even though I don't have my ear pierced, it didn't bleed so much. But please, if you do know the ears, in fact, bleed as much as you say, don't mind me at all.
...also, you win for the mention of Loveless xDD.
Keep up the good work and update soon!.
12/6/2008 c1 Dusty Mirror 08
Hey there CJ, long time no see.
I definitely like this writing style. I'd fix a few things here and there, but it's your fic. Do what you want. -cough-enjoy the moment-cough-
Now for a small critic: It might be just me, but i find it easier to separate paragraphs and dialogue. It makes thing a bit less confusing, especially when you use so much detail (Which, btw, i love.). Don't quote me on this, though. If that's your style, then please don't mind me x3.
Overall, i -really- liked it. I knew it'd be good when i read the idea you had in mind :3.
Sorry for not reviewing sooner .-. Update soon~
Hey there CJ, long time no see.
I definitely like this writing style. I'd fix a few things here and there, but it's your fic. Do what you want. -cough-enjoy the moment-cough-
Now for a small critic: It might be just me, but i find it easier to separate paragraphs and dialogue. It makes thing a bit less confusing, especially when you use so much detail (Which, btw, i love.). Don't quote me on this, though. If that's your style, then please don't mind me x3.
Overall, i -really- liked it. I knew it'd be good when i read the idea you had in mind :3.
Sorry for not reviewing sooner .-. Update soon~