for Afterwards: A Tale Of TV11/17/2009 c1 Guest
this is a joke, right?
this is a joke, right?
8/29/2009 c1 Guest
Nonsense
Nonsense
6/27/2009 c1 
4GrassGreenGrows
you must write the revenge of the pizza man! you have my sense of humor.
4GrassGreenGrowsyou must write the revenge of the pizza man! you have my sense of humor.
1/2/2009 c1 33Llama Queen Katie
Nice! Totally and completely random...LOVED IT! You should read some of the random Pendragon fics I've written...again, loved this!
33Llama Queen KatieNice! Totally and completely random...LOVED IT! You should read some of the random Pendragon fics I've written...again, loved this!
12/12/2008 c1 4Silverstar366
I really like it. You incorporated Spader's cool accent into modern day earth. Also, Max gangster? AWESOME! so definitely write more. It was really funny and if you've read the other books it's even better then them!(love the anvil!)
4Silverstar366I really like it. You incorporated Spader's cool accent into modern day earth. Also, Max gangster? AWESOME! so definitely write more. It was really funny and if you've read the other books it's even better then them!(love the anvil!)
12/5/2008 c1 17Aero-Dragon's-Sky
Pretty funny, but you REALLY need to work on your grammar. Especially capitalization, quotes, and punctuation. You're spelling was pretty good, though.
17Aero-Dragon's-SkyPretty funny, but you REALLY need to work on your grammar. Especially capitalization, quotes, and punctuation. You're spelling was pretty good, though.