for Perfect11/11/2013 c1 Guest
simply beautiful. You managed to make something I thought was disgusting when other people wrote about it, seem beautiful and right to me. thankyou
simply beautiful. You managed to make something I thought was disgusting when other people wrote about it, seem beautiful and right to me. thankyou
1/6/2013 c1 
2Brown Eyed Girl 42
Aww this deserves a review ) This was fluffy and sweet and meaningful ) Nice
2Brown Eyed Girl 42Aww this deserves a review ) This was fluffy and sweet and meaningful ) Nice
4/17/2012 c1 NanaLoveChel
What a sweet, pure, and lovely story! I had really hot moments, really heartfelt loving moments, really childish and happy moments! It was a really beautiful and sweet way of encapturing Hikaru and Kaorus relationship! 3 good job!
What a sweet, pure, and lovely story! I had really hot moments, really heartfelt loving moments, really childish and happy moments! It was a really beautiful and sweet way of encapturing Hikaru and Kaorus relationship! 3 good job!
10/28/2011 c1 3GoPlayInTrafficxox
This was so cute and sweet i love you. You need to make another fic with the twins except preferably with Hikaru proposing to Kaoru or even mpreg. Good job for one of your first fics
3GoPlayInTrafficxoxThis was so cute and sweet i love you. You need to make another fic with the twins except preferably with Hikaru proposing to Kaoru or even mpreg. Good job for one of your first fics
2/8/2011 c1 geeman13
wow. the writing style is amazing; there is so much emotion in this and I love it! I like the idea of flashbacks and then his current emotions.
good job!:D
wow. the writing style is amazing; there is so much emotion in this and I love it! I like the idea of flashbacks and then his current emotions.
good job!:D
1/15/2011 c1 yaoifangirl555
Love is the most pure emotion,the must powerfull,and don't matter if this is between a girl and a boy ,or boyxboy.I don't think that is disgusting or wrong,no...is not,anyway this is love!The love can't be diffrent,is the same feeling ,the heaven between he/she and you.
LOVE HIKAKAO!:3
Love is the most pure emotion,the must powerfull,and don't matter if this is between a girl and a boy ,or boyxboy.I don't think that is disgusting or wrong,no...is not,anyway this is love!The love can't be diffrent,is the same feeling ,the heaven between he/she and you.
LOVE HIKAKAO!:3
7/23/2010 c1 3LondonOnyx
wow. this is just...amazing
one of the best hikakao i've ever read, no doubt!
3LondonOnyxwow. this is just...amazing
one of the best hikakao i've ever read, no doubt!
11/27/2009 c1 Vera
Well yeah, your story is perfect,thank you author 3
Well yeah, your story is perfect,thank you author 3