for Akuma no Naruto5/4/2009 c6 Seimika
you know this group of people kinda reminds me of the group of rich ppl in yu yu hakusho. also about the earth bloodline.. maybe naruto should try and remake it but with all the other elements as well and give it to his...generals i guess you could call them and possible himself?
you know this group of people kinda reminds me of the group of rich ppl in yu yu hakusho. also about the earth bloodline.. maybe naruto should try and remake it but with all the other elements as well and give it to his...generals i guess you could call them and possible himself?
5/4/2009 c6 Celestia GF of the Void
Cool story. I'm very interested to see how things will go. Anko seems alittle more nuts than usual with the fanatasism(spellcheck?). Toph was a nice add in though, always liked her. I am very curious about this Organization 13 style thing going on. Makes me wonder if its Black Cat style, or more Kingdom Hearts style. Can't wait to see more of this, and I am curious if Naruto will have any sort of love interest, after all, all Gods need a Goddess. Keep up the good work and please update again soon
Cool story. I'm very interested to see how things will go. Anko seems alittle more nuts than usual with the fanatasism(spellcheck?). Toph was a nice add in though, always liked her. I am very curious about this Organization 13 style thing going on. Makes me wonder if its Black Cat style, or more Kingdom Hearts style. Can't wait to see more of this, and I am curious if Naruto will have any sort of love interest, after all, all Gods need a Goddess. Keep up the good work and please update again soon
5/4/2009 c6 Houkou 121
hey awesome chapter i almost thought this story was abandoned im glad it wasn't as its hard to find any good stories these days on this site
hey awesome chapter i almost thought this story was abandoned im glad it wasn't as its hard to find any good stories these days on this site
5/3/2009 c6 
3BleachedShadow
Yay two chapters at once! -does a little dance of happiness- Wonderfully written chapters as always. I can't wait till the next one!
3BleachedShadowYay two chapters at once! -does a little dance of happiness- Wonderfully written chapters as always. I can't wait till the next one!
4/26/2009 c4 Pommyth
Ok... so far it's a great story. You don't find a dark time travel fic everywhere and I love Dark Naruto. I can't understand how he could sacrifice himself for a village which hate him. So.. I'm hoping you'll update soon.
Ok... so far it's a great story. You don't find a dark time travel fic everywhere and I love Dark Naruto. I can't understand how he could sacrifice himself for a village which hate him. So.. I'm hoping you'll update soon.
3/12/2009 c4 5Esus927
Nice story so far, look forward to an update.
As for the romance note you left; I hope you don't do a harem. For a harem fic to work, you need to focus a lot of time on the pairings, otherwise it comes off bad. Since your story focus is on Naruto's rise to power, I hope you do a single girl pairing or none at all.
5Esus927Nice story so far, look forward to an update.
As for the romance note you left; I hope you don't do a harem. For a harem fic to work, you need to focus a lot of time on the pairings, otherwise it comes off bad. Since your story focus is on Naruto's rise to power, I hope you do a single girl pairing or none at all.
3/9/2009 c4 matrice
The concept of a dark naruto who goes back to the past is not something you see very often. I have read another great fanfic on this genre, but generally it is him trying to save his friends and to keep Sasuke from joining Orochimaru. This approach is pretty interesting, and I loved Neji's new style: concentrating on perfecting the juuken and already known tecniques whose counters are already known is not the right thing to do if you want to squash the competition, why scrape the remains of the Main Family tecniques when you could improve on what you already know and make your own style (there is where the word "genius" can be used in its right context). I had hoped that there would be more interest on Itachi's part, but he does seem quite satisfied with his current arrangements, but since we don't know the entirety of Naruto's group I won't jump to conclusions, beside hw already has Anko, who started out as a jounin level kunoichi. Her presence in his ranks should speed things up and make a confrontation with Orochimaru in the future a plausible possibility. The presence of her and Neji on the team of nukenins should prompt some interest in the field of sealing, since the both of them have seals that in the right circumstances could incapacitate them quite easily, if the ones who put them on their skins were to be around.
The concept of a dark naruto who goes back to the past is not something you see very often. I have read another great fanfic on this genre, but generally it is him trying to save his friends and to keep Sasuke from joining Orochimaru. This approach is pretty interesting, and I loved Neji's new style: concentrating on perfecting the juuken and already known tecniques whose counters are already known is not the right thing to do if you want to squash the competition, why scrape the remains of the Main Family tecniques when you could improve on what you already know and make your own style (there is where the word "genius" can be used in its right context). I had hoped that there would be more interest on Itachi's part, but he does seem quite satisfied with his current arrangements, but since we don't know the entirety of Naruto's group I won't jump to conclusions, beside hw already has Anko, who started out as a jounin level kunoichi. Her presence in his ranks should speed things up and make a confrontation with Orochimaru in the future a plausible possibility. The presence of her and Neji on the team of nukenins should prompt some interest in the field of sealing, since the both of them have seals that in the right circumstances could incapacitate them quite easily, if the ones who put them on their skins were to be around.