2/24/2009 c4 Angel'sMystery
WOW! I love your fic! Is there anyway that you can make Itachi one of Naruto's allies...I find that Itachi is my favorite character in the Naruto Series, and am very interested in the take you would have in having itachi join naruto. and having itachi actually betray Konoha, and not on orders of the council!
Anyway, keep up writing this awesome story! I can't wait for more, so please update soon!
WOW! I love your fic! Is there anyway that you can make Itachi one of Naruto's allies...I find that Itachi is my favorite character in the Naruto Series, and am very interested in the take you would have in having itachi join naruto. and having itachi actually betray Konoha, and not on orders of the council!
Anyway, keep up writing this awesome story! I can't wait for more, so please update soon!
2/12/2009 c4 rags007
great story...innovative really...and wat r the dark rituals u were talking abou that naroto knew?...neways update soon k...
great story...innovative really...and wat r the dark rituals u were talking abou that naroto knew?...neways update soon k...
2/11/2009 c4 6KuroAi15
ZOMG! Spoof time!
"You know how you've always wondered about what my dream was?" Naruto asked, breaking the quiet.
"Yes..."
"It's to conquer all of the villages."
Neji's eyes flickered over to Naruto again. "All?"
"Yes. All."
"Why?" Neji questioned.
"You really wanna know why?" Naruto cast a sidelong glance at his companion.
Neji nodded.
"It's so..." Naruto lept to feet and screamed, "I CAN CONTROL THE WORLD'S PRODUCTION AND EXPORTATION OF POCKY!"
Neji's eyes shone an unearthly gold color for a Hyuuga as he kneeled before the boy, "NARUTO-SAMA! I WILL FOLLOW YOU FOREVER AND HELP YOU ACHIEVE YOUR DREAM!"
lol. that's more like my dream. Update soon!
ZOMG! Spoof time!
"You know how you've always wondered about what my dream was?" Naruto asked, breaking the quiet.
"Yes..."
"It's to conquer all of the villages."
Neji's eyes flickered over to Naruto again. "All?"
"Yes. All."
"Why?" Neji questioned.
"You really wanna know why?" Naruto cast a sidelong glance at his companion.
Neji nodded.
"It's so..." Naruto lept to feet and screamed, "I CAN CONTROL THE WORLD'S PRODUCTION AND EXPORTATION OF POCKY!"
Neji's eyes shone an unearthly gold color for a Hyuuga as he kneeled before the boy, "NARUTO-SAMA! I WILL FOLLOW YOU FOREVER AND HELP YOU ACHIEVE YOUR DREAM!"
lol. that's more like my dream. Update soon!
2/9/2009 c4 1doodlekitt
OMG Evil Naruto Protagonist! nice. Better than I hoped for. Update soon (please)!
OMG Evil Naruto Protagonist! nice. Better than I hoped for. Update soon (please)!
2/7/2009 c4 1Carma Nightmare
I love your story and hate harems write what you will and i shal read it regardles, good luck!
I love your story and hate harems write what you will and i shal read it regardles, good luck!
2/2/2009 c2 SuperN-Gaspard
Okay chap but didn't Hizashi die when Neji was 4? I remember it was Hinata's third birthday.
Okay chap but didn't Hizashi die when Neji was 4? I remember it was Hinata's third birthday.