for Akuma no Naruto2/2/2009 c4 Barranca
For me that scene did not sound gay at all, just a little brainwashed. I guess it's all in the eye of the beholder :P Naruto does have an unfair advantage over Neji, all that life experience must make it easy to mold and manipulate.
For me that scene did not sound gay at all, just a little brainwashed. I guess it's all in the eye of the beholder :P Naruto does have an unfair advantage over Neji, all that life experience must make it easy to mold and manipulate.
2/2/2009 c4 
5Fox Boss
Think that you could add Yakumo and Isaribi(both from the regular anime), and Fuka(from the Shippudan). They are all strong in some way. For more info go to Naruto.wikia and just type in their names.
5Fox BossThink that you could add Yakumo and Isaribi(both from the regular anime), and Fuka(from the Shippudan). They are all strong in some way. For more info go to Naruto.wikia and just type in their names.
2/1/2009 c1 2Vilkath
Interesting but some what stupid Naruto. I mean honestly did almost exact same thing Kyuubi did.. and look what happend to that fox? Taunting the weaker enemies, letting them scramble to find ways to win.. letting the hokage run away constantly instead killing him when Naruto could the first time.
Just like the Kyuubi ended up sealed inside Naruto 'due to underestimating mortals' Naruto got his ass kicked by a sucidal seal. Honestly almost an exact repeat of the kyuubi defeat.. I never did like 'dumb' naruto fics.
2VilkathInteresting but some what stupid Naruto. I mean honestly did almost exact same thing Kyuubi did.. and look what happend to that fox? Taunting the weaker enemies, letting them scramble to find ways to win.. letting the hokage run away constantly instead killing him when Naruto could the first time.
Just like the Kyuubi ended up sealed inside Naruto 'due to underestimating mortals' Naruto got his ass kicked by a sucidal seal. Honestly almost an exact repeat of the kyuubi defeat.. I never did like 'dumb' naruto fics.
2/1/2009 c4 6saiyan prince1
umm this gets interesting. i wonder if he will try to get itachi to join him. it would be very interesting indeed
6saiyan prince1umm this gets interesting. i wonder if he will try to get itachi to join him. it would be very interesting indeed
2/1/2009 c4 3Artful Lounger
Okay, all I can really say is that he's moving too soon. Sure, I can understand that he's strong and all, but leaving the village at this point is simply a case of bad timing. Why leave now? There's the old saying 'Keep your friends close but your enemies closer' He should do as much as he can to stay in Konoha, gathering information and intelligence on them, not leaving at the first chance. Sure, he hates them and wants to destroy them, but he would benefit more from information than anything else right now.
Also, as for the reasons behind his wanting to conquer all of the hidden villages, they are just a bit two dimensional. To destroy things because he can, and then what? He doesn't have any real goals. Destruction, conquest, it's all well and good but it becomes predictable after a while.
3Artful LoungerOkay, all I can really say is that he's moving too soon. Sure, I can understand that he's strong and all, but leaving the village at this point is simply a case of bad timing. Why leave now? There's the old saying 'Keep your friends close but your enemies closer' He should do as much as he can to stay in Konoha, gathering information and intelligence on them, not leaving at the first chance. Sure, he hates them and wants to destroy them, but he would benefit more from information than anything else right now.
Also, as for the reasons behind his wanting to conquer all of the hidden villages, they are just a bit two dimensional. To destroy things because he can, and then what? He doesn't have any real goals. Destruction, conquest, it's all well and good but it becomes predictable after a while.
1/18/2009 c3 1ellesra
This, to, has become something that I could like, actually. Keep up the good stuff, and I'll continue reading! :D Cheers ^^
P.S; Would love some updates on that other fic? (aa)
1ellesraThis, to, has become something that I could like, actually. Keep up the good stuff, and I'll continue reading! :D Cheers ^^
P.S; Would love some updates on that other fic? (aa)
1/18/2009 c3 1Mismoree
Ok, this is a pretty awesome story. I like how you had a dark evil Naruto instead of a Good Naruto.
1MismoreeOk, this is a pretty awesome story. I like how you had a dark evil Naruto instead of a Good Naruto.
1/17/2009 c2 5Fox Boss
the pairing be NarutoxHarem: Fem.Kyuubi, Fem.Deidara, Hana(Kiba's Sister), Hinata, Ino, Tayuya, , Fem.Haku, Shizune, Yugao, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, Yugito, Nibi(Yoruichi's body),
the 7 Tail Jinchuriki(not OC look for The 9 Jinchuriki picture, she is next to Naruto with the Waterfall Headband ), 7 Tail Beast, Samui(one of Kirabi(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices), Karui(one of Kirabi(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices, and Ayame(ramen girl).
5Fox Bossthe pairing be NarutoxHarem: Fem.Kyuubi, Fem.Deidara, Hana(Kiba's Sister), Hinata, Ino, Tayuya, , Fem.Haku, Shizune, Yugao, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, Yugito, Nibi(Yoruichi's body),
the 7 Tail Jinchuriki(not OC look for The 9 Jinchuriki picture, she is next to Naruto with the Waterfall Headband ), 7 Tail Beast, Samui(one of Kirabi(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices), Karui(one of Kirabi(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices, and Ayame(ramen girl).
1/17/2009 c3 Barranca
Wo, finally an update!
I'm glad to see Naruto has also managed to win Anko over, it's always good to have diverse allies, with different specialties and in different age groups.
By the way, it would be ironic if Naruto convinced Sasuke that he can gain power best by joining Naruto against everyone else. :D
Wo, finally an update!
I'm glad to see Naruto has also managed to win Anko over, it's always good to have diverse allies, with different specialties and in different age groups.
By the way, it would be ironic if Naruto convinced Sasuke that he can gain power best by joining Naruto against everyone else. :D
1/17/2009 c3 Fox Boss
You should add Yakumo(from the anime) to the group. Also have the pairing be NarutoxHarem: Fem.Kyuubi, Fem.Deidara, Hana(Kiba's Sister), Hinata, Ino, Tayuya, Mikoto (Sasuke's mom can say Itachi hide her away), Fem.Haku, Shizune, Yugao, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, Yugito(Yoruichi's body), Nibi, Yakumo(Kurama Clan), Isaribi(Fish Girl from the sea monster filler), Toki(princess of the Land of Birds), Haruna(princess of the Land of Vegetables), Shion(Naruto Shippuden the Movie 1 and priestess from the Demon Country), Koyuki/(From Naruto the Movie 1 and the princess of the Land of Snow/Spring and maybe she can have the ring of water), Kamina(Naruto the Movie 2), Ranke(Naruto the Movie 2), Fugai(Naruto the Movie 2), er), Kujaku(from the final filler of Naruto part 1), Fuka(from the 1st filler of Naruto Shippuden), the 7 Tail Jinchuriki(not OC look for The 9 Jinchuriki picture, she is next to Naruto with the Waterfall Headband ), 7 Tail Beast, Samui(one of Killer Bee(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices that go looking for him after being captured by Sasuke), Karui(one of Killer Bee(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices that go looking for him after being captured by Sasuke), amd Ayame.
For more info on these girls go to 'http:/naruto./wiki' and just type in their name.
You should add Yakumo(from the anime) to the group. Also have the pairing be NarutoxHarem: Fem.Kyuubi, Fem.Deidara, Hana(Kiba's Sister), Hinata, Ino, Tayuya, Mikoto (Sasuke's mom can say Itachi hide her away), Fem.Haku, Shizune, Yugao, Anko, Kurenai, Temari, Yugito(Yoruichi's body), Nibi, Yakumo(Kurama Clan), Isaribi(Fish Girl from the sea monster filler), Toki(princess of the Land of Birds), Haruna(princess of the Land of Vegetables), Shion(Naruto Shippuden the Movie 1 and priestess from the Demon Country), Koyuki/(From Naruto the Movie 1 and the princess of the Land of Snow/Spring and maybe she can have the ring of water), Kamina(Naruto the Movie 2), Ranke(Naruto the Movie 2), Fugai(Naruto the Movie 2), er), Kujaku(from the final filler of Naruto part 1), Fuka(from the 1st filler of Naruto Shippuden), the 7 Tail Jinchuriki(not OC look for The 9 Jinchuriki picture, she is next to Naruto with the Waterfall Headband ), 7 Tail Beast, Samui(one of Killer Bee(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices that go looking for him after being captured by Sasuke), Karui(one of Killer Bee(8 Tail Jinchuriki)'s apprentices that go looking for him after being captured by Sasuke), amd Ayame.
For more info on these girls go to 'http:/naruto./wiki' and just type in their name.