5/2/2016 c1 3Narutofanninja2
It was really good, short but good. Turn it into a few chapters and voila your on ya a new writer myself, if y mind would you look at my story "meeting Yondaime" keep ya updated on ya stories
It was really good, short but good. Turn it into a few chapters and voila your on ya a new writer myself, if y mind would you look at my story "meeting Yondaime" keep ya updated on ya stories
12/24/2015 c1 6littlemissfei
It is a good story but if you can make it slightly longer than it would be great! Keep up a good work okay ?
It is a good story but if you can make it slightly longer than it would be great! Keep up a good work okay ?
12/10/2015 c1 boobooface
You should continue!
You should continue!
9/27/2015 c1 3Ceramic Monkey
... Yoai! thank you so much! it was short but wonderful like eating apple pie on a warm Sunday evening
... Yoai! thank you so much! it was short but wonderful like eating apple pie on a warm Sunday evening
10/14/2012 c1 Nealheart9
It may have been really short, but it was one of the cutest things i have read!
It may have been really short, but it was one of the cutest things i have read!
9/18/2010 c1 chobits909
loved it!
*wants more*
!
loved it!
*wants more*
!
3/3/2009 c1 12Narukashi666
It's beautiful. I'd work on the puncuation a little more, but it's pretty good anyway. You're good at describing things what's happening too. All in all...
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I LOVE IT!
It's beautiful. I'd work on the puncuation a little more, but it's pretty good anyway. You're good at describing things what's happening too. All in all...
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I LOVE IT!
12/27/2008 c1 38HoT.aGaiNsT.a.WaLL
(pouts) that was too short. it was really cute so you should have made it longer. Oh! and You really didn't have to rate this one M... it would have been fine as T fyi... but it was so cute!
(pouts) that was too short. it was really cute so you should have made it longer. Oh! and You really didn't have to rate this one M... it would have been fine as T fyi... but it was so cute!
12/24/2008 c1 2littleichigo
aw that was a really sweet story, and it doesnt matter how long it is it still leaves a fuzzy feeling behind lol!
aw that was a really sweet story, and it doesnt matter how long it is it still leaves a fuzzy feeling behind lol!
12/12/2008 c1 Flash654321
naw ♥
Vair short but it's extreme amount of awesome makes up for that
you have truly earned yourself a cookie
*hands you cookie*
♥
naw ♥
Vair short but it's extreme amount of awesome makes up for that
you have truly earned yourself a cookie
*hands you cookie*
♥