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4/21/2012 c3 Kiryulover1
Are you gonna post the next chapter up soon. Sorry but I can run thin on patience sometimes, especially when I'm waiting for something good to come out
6/2/2009 c3 22Yusei
Great story so far, Natsumi. Especially how tragic you've made Kiryu's past, convincing himself he didn't want to kill his father and unintentionally sacrificing his mother at the same time. Makes for a great twist. And Yusei getting emotional is something I didn't expect, but there was so much emphasis on how much he values Kiryu. I'm glad that Kiryu decided to turn on Rudger and Demak, wonder what Rudger's planning, especially with the preview and title for chapter 4. Hope you can update soon.
5/28/2009 c1 3AliADORABLE
please finish
12/15/2008 c1 3Maebara Keiichi
Silly Crow getting himself captured. He tried so hard to avoid anyone getting hurt. I'm surprised by Kiryu's mark, almost like it's a warning about what lies ahead for Team Satisfaction. Nice work, Natsumi, hope you update soon.

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