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2/7/2012 c1 HereToRead84
aaww this is sad.
4/14/2010 c1 AquaRibbon
Oh wow! I just finished reading 'Mistakes' and popped over to see if you had any other fics, and boy am I glad I did! This is beautiful, simple and short but yet so full of emotion. The last few sentences made my heart ache. Well done! :D
4/4/2010 c1 0animelover0
aw...

i love tha part where you say he played wiht her hair proving that he felt something
4/2/2010 c1 36Miss Pennyfeather
So I read this short fic and I must say it's pretty good. It's bittersweet and it's simple, like all the feelings fly off the page. I think I spotted some grammar mistakes, you might want to check that, but apart from that the story feels really nice, like a sort of goodbye letter. I love the last four sentences, spot-on.

I would have liked for some things to be more developed but if you intended for it to be this way, then it's okay with me. Do write some more though, if I'm not mistaken this story is from 2008 so it's been a while:)

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