for What Gain Was Theirs1/12/2010 c1 ayasse
Lovely story - smoothly flowing flashbacks and well written dialog, enjoyed reading it very much.
Lovely story - smoothly flowing flashbacks and well written dialog, enjoyed reading it very much.
4/29/2009 c1 
76Keppiehed
Beautiful story, very touching. I thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing. Please keep writing; you have a rare talent. Thanks for sharing.
76KeppiehedBeautiful story, very touching. I thoroughly enjoyed the whole thing. Please keep writing; you have a rare talent. Thanks for sharing.
4/14/2009 c1 mezzles
Beautiful story, easy to follow and well written. The second last section had some beautiful imagery from the simple opening "There had been brilliance." Thoroughly enjoyable, keep up the good work and thanks for the read!
Beautiful story, easy to follow and well written. The second last section had some beautiful imagery from the simple opening "There had been brilliance." Thoroughly enjoyable, keep up the good work and thanks for the read!