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10/13/2009 c1 kei-chama
Nice story~

Dramatic yet comprehensive =D
1/13/2009 c1 14CapoExecutor
Thus he became the enemy of everybody. He became the enemy of Shana. In order to save them he became the enemy of the world.

I can definitely see a similarity between Yuji and Lelouch. Both became the enemies of the world in order to create a new one.
12/16/2008 c1 Sakai Yuji
Wonderful I hope to see more works like this, you view of the events taking place in his mind were spot on. I hope to see more work like this in the future.

Sakai Yuji
12/12/2008 c1 bloodyknight85
The unfortunate fate of our hero, Sakai Yuji... And he isn't even alive at all... How ironic can that be?

No one would have ever experienced his destiny at all... or at least that is what i think... I hope that i am right about that.
12/12/2008 c1 Anonymous
Your grammar is actually perfect for this story. It feels similar to the grammar you get in anime fansubs, when Japanese is translated into English. In other words, your grammar has minor quirks, but for this type of work, it makes the story better.
12/10/2008 c1 10JohnPeacekeeper
I love it. You made it so poetic. I rate 4 out of 5.

This is the exact motive I thought would transform Yuji into the (pampampam) Snake of the Festival.

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