for The NonDenominational Party8/26/2013 c1 
4tigerlily124
Derren Brown trick lol! Good one. Patrick would have beaten him though so good job on the tickets.
4tigerlily124Derren Brown trick lol! Good one. Patrick would have beaten him though so good job on the tickets.
3/5/2013 c1 46janesbiotch
this story is so sweet and funny and entertaining every time that i read it.
46janesbiotchthis story is so sweet and funny and entertaining every time that i read it.
5/1/2012 c1 6Maggy
VERY nice!
What great "non-denominational holiday" story for *The Mentalist*.
Well done.
6MaggyVERY nice!
What great "non-denominational holiday" story for *The Mentalist*.
Well done.
11/10/2011 c1 Nucksfan2011
You got the voices but this BMX thing is Derren Brown. He did it with Simon Pegg. Hmm, not exactly original...
You got the voices but this BMX thing is Derren Brown. He did it with Simon Pegg. Hmm, not exactly original...
4/16/2009 c1 4Sky-Thorn
Very good. Did you get the idea for the story from Derren Brown? I swear he did something very similar with Simon Pegg. But yeah, very very good. And funny too, and so exactly what Jane would do.
4Sky-ThornVery good. Did you get the idea for the story from Derren Brown? I swear he did something very similar with Simon Pegg. But yeah, very very good. And funny too, and so exactly what Jane would do.
12/31/2008 c1 3Lerrinus
OMG this is bleedin' brilliant, you got Patrick Jane and Rigsby down perfectly, I can see this happening on the show, great work, loved the ending! :-D
3LerrinusOMG this is bleedin' brilliant, you got Patrick Jane and Rigsby down perfectly, I can see this happening on the show, great work, loved the ending! :-D
12/23/2008 c1 19bulletproofweeks
Ha! Ha! I love it! This really got me in the holiday spirit! At first I thought the bike thing was a grammatical error, but then it happened again... AMAZING, FUN STORY!
19bulletproofweeksHa! Ha! I love it! This really got me in the holiday spirit! At first I thought the bike thing was a grammatical error, but then it happened again... AMAZING, FUN STORY!
12/16/2008 c1 38mswyrr
I really enjoyed reading this! I thought your characterization was good and you really captured the dynamic Jane has with the rest of the team.
38mswyrrI really enjoyed reading this! I thought your characterization was good and you really captured the dynamic Jane has with the rest of the team.
12/13/2008 c1 2flyersgirl12
very cool story :) nice darren brown trick and i always knew rigsby was a hockey guy :D
2flyersgirl12very cool story :) nice darren brown trick and i always knew rigsby was a hockey guy :D
12/13/2008 c1 15mylittlehazmat
Cute. I'd be pleased if you'd write another Mentalist fic. You're very good at coming up with tricks. ;D
Cheers,
Kirsten
15mylittlehazmatCute. I'd be pleased if you'd write another Mentalist fic. You're very good at coming up with tricks. ;D
Cheers,
Kirsten