
9/21/2019 c2 Guest
Is there a finished story after ten years?
Is there a finished story after ten years?
2/14/2011 c2
7Jigoku no Yami
Bring in the Night Lords, or maybe the Tau...yes the Tau would be perfect friends for the Doctor.

Bring in the Night Lords, or maybe the Tau...yes the Tau would be perfect friends for the Doctor.
7/26/2010 c2 Anonimus
Its great.
It would be great if the Tartis ended up facing an intire imperial fleet or incounteryng the orks.
The best would be if they ended up on Armagedon during the 3 war of Armagedon right in the midle of a battlefiled with millions of orks charging from 1 side and millions of guardsman charging from the othere.
All in all great work.
Its great.
It would be great if the Tartis ended up facing an intire imperial fleet or incounteryng the orks.
The best would be if they ended up on Armagedon during the 3 war of Armagedon right in the midle of a battlefiled with millions of orks charging from 1 side and millions of guardsman charging from the othere.
All in all great work.
7/18/2010 c1
1Wissam
Really nice, you've got the characters to a t...but did it HAVE to be the Cadian 8th and Ultramarines? There are thousands of Marines to choose from, and any number of Guard...

Really nice, you've got the characters to a t...but did it HAVE to be the Cadian 8th and Ultramarines? There are thousands of Marines to choose from, and any number of Guard...
6/7/2010 c2 Kartha
This fic is pretty good, I like the Captain Janus, but I you seriously underpower the marines and make them sound and act like Khornates ^^
This fic is pretty good, I like the Captain Janus, but I you seriously underpower the marines and make them sound and act like Khornates ^^
3/20/2010 c2
5DeKarbon
I would like to think that 40k is more than just an anomaly.
I'm not all that familiar with Doctor Who, so if you could fill me in on Jack and how he managed to survive a bolter round through the chest, it would be greatly appreciated. Oh, and, bolter rounds never stray off the target.
Another thing, power armor is made of ceramite, not adamantium. It's pretty much just as dense and durable as adamantium, but it goes by a different name.
In my opinion, I think that the Ultramarines would have had a far faster reaction time to him freeing himself, as they are superhuman in every sense of every trait.
And just because they are full of zeal and fury, does not mean they do not possess level heads. Especially a Captain. And even more especially a Captain of the Ultramarines.
If you already knew most of that rant, you can ignore it, but if you didn't, then, The More You Know.
And one last thing,
The Emperor Protects.

I would like to think that 40k is more than just an anomaly.
I'm not all that familiar with Doctor Who, so if you could fill me in on Jack and how he managed to survive a bolter round through the chest, it would be greatly appreciated. Oh, and, bolter rounds never stray off the target.
Another thing, power armor is made of ceramite, not adamantium. It's pretty much just as dense and durable as adamantium, but it goes by a different name.
In my opinion, I think that the Ultramarines would have had a far faster reaction time to him freeing himself, as they are superhuman in every sense of every trait.
And just because they are full of zeal and fury, does not mean they do not possess level heads. Especially a Captain. And even more especially a Captain of the Ultramarines.
If you already knew most of that rant, you can ignore it, but if you didn't, then, The More You Know.
And one last thing,
The Emperor Protects.
11/29/2009 c2 mf
more please
more please
9/15/2009 c2 mf
more please
more please
8/19/2009 c2 mf
more please
more please
3/7/2009 c2 passed
I really like your fic! Your writing style is totally fantastic and sophisticated. And you've done a really good job on projecting the images of gore and destruction. Well done! :)
Spotted a few typos though:-
“You’re so called" - 'your'
"had no taken away" - 'not'
"am working on it though" - 'though.' You've got quite a few punctuation errors, but apart from that, it's brilliant!
P:S Good luck with your GCSEs; don't worry though, they're really easy! ;)
I really like your fic! Your writing style is totally fantastic and sophisticated. And you've done a really good job on projecting the images of gore and destruction. Well done! :)
Spotted a few typos though:-
“You’re so called" - 'your'
"had no taken away" - 'not'
"am working on it though" - 'though.' You've got quite a few punctuation errors, but apart from that, it's brilliant!
P:S Good luck with your GCSEs; don't worry though, they're really easy! ;)
1/15/2009 c1 Teh One
Awesomesauce! I love Doctor Who and Warhammer, so this story is perfect for me. But if the Doctor knew WHY the Exterminatus was created, he may be a bit less shocked.
Awesomesauce! I love Doctor Who and Warhammer, so this story is perfect for me. But if the Doctor knew WHY the Exterminatus was created, he may be a bit less shocked.