
3/1/2010 c1
3ShesGotStyle16
Oh! That was so sweet! I loved it. Keep writing.
:D 3 vIvA jAsPeR e AlIcE! 3 :D

Oh! That was so sweet! I loved it. Keep writing.
:D 3 vIvA jAsPeR e AlIcE! 3 :D
11/22/2009 c1 terri
i think there cool but i like my sisters poems and stories better soz loser
i think there cool but i like my sisters poems and stories better soz loser
8/13/2009 c1
2Jezzvamp
i like them. but i prefer Alice's. the jasper one confused me on a few lines. but yea, the Alice one i like alot.

i like them. but i prefer Alice's. the jasper one confused me on a few lines. but yea, the Alice one i like alot.
1/19/2009 c1
5Dean's Girl 1967
This was pure sweetness! Do you have anymore fanfics? i absolutely love Jasper with my entire being and would love to read more! keep up the good work!

This was pure sweetness! Do you have anymore fanfics? i absolutely love Jasper with my entire being and would love to read more! keep up the good work!
12/28/2008 c1
6Pixie-Alice-Cullen
I loved this.
It was nice to have a view of Alice's past.
Jasper's poem was exactly how I would picture him thinking/acting.
"Like the leaves in fall,
I'd fall for you to,
I'd die to protect you"
Keep up the good work!

I loved this.
It was nice to have a view of Alice's past.
Jasper's poem was exactly how I would picture him thinking/acting.
"Like the leaves in fall,
I'd fall for you to,
I'd die to protect you"
Keep up the good work!
12/23/2008 c1
1RedHeadedFury
I like this a lot because it doesn't really our right say anything, and it has a really nice even flow to it. XD Its simple and sweet.
-Sam

I like this a lot because it doesn't really our right say anything, and it has a really nice even flow to it. XD Its simple and sweet.
-Sam
12/14/2008 c1 cristal
Jaspers part was...tear worthy.
I didn't get Alice though.
Jaspers part was...tear worthy.
I didn't get Alice though.
12/14/2008 c1 Dakota
These are both excellent. I especially like Jasper's poem.
These are both excellent. I especially like Jasper's poem.
12/13/2008 c1
13Lady Saruman
Hmm, like I said. I love how these two poems beautifully illustrate in depth the characteristics of Alice and Jasper while at the same time, a brief glimpse of their history. It pulls at the heartstrings.

Hmm, like I said. I love how these two poems beautifully illustrate in depth the characteristics of Alice and Jasper while at the same time, a brief glimpse of their history. It pulls at the heartstrings.