for Who Am I?6/27/2011 c9 
31Sakura Lisel
Hmm... I thought Hermione's supposed to HATE Lucious, so why's she addressing her stepdad's murderer as 'dad'? She should show she's still mad by REFUSING to call him anything that refers to him as her father, and call him by his first name or his last name. The git killed the ONLY father she's ever known, just to get her and her mom, made her stay in her new bedroom during the short stay home before going to Hogwarts, and didn't even bother getting to know her, etc. Yet now she's doing something respectful like call him by the title she should still owe her stepdad, who loved and raised her as her own all these years with her mom? The fact that Lucious murdered him to get him out of the way, should be enough to stop her from calling him dad or anything else.
31Sakura LiselHmm... I thought Hermione's supposed to HATE Lucious, so why's she addressing her stepdad's murderer as 'dad'? She should show she's still mad by REFUSING to call him anything that refers to him as her father, and call him by his first name or his last name. The git killed the ONLY father she's ever known, just to get her and her mom, made her stay in her new bedroom during the short stay home before going to Hogwarts, and didn't even bother getting to know her, etc. Yet now she's doing something respectful like call him by the title she should still owe her stepdad, who loved and raised her as her own all these years with her mom? The fact that Lucious murdered him to get him out of the way, should be enough to stop her from calling him dad or anything else.
6/27/2011 c8 Sakura Lisel
Okay, WHY is Jane sleeping with Lucious? The jerk murdered her husband, who she must still love, and it hasn't even been a WEEK (I think *lol*) and she's already beding down with her husbands killer like what happened to Dan Granger means nothing to her anymore after all these years spent with him?
Okay, WHY is Jane sleeping with Lucious? The jerk murdered her husband, who she must still love, and it hasn't even been a WEEK (I think *lol*) and she's already beding down with her husbands killer like what happened to Dan Granger means nothing to her anymore after all these years spent with him?
6/27/2011 c4 Sakura Lisel
Okay, what does Lucious mean by Jane will be his again as well as Hermione when he killed Hermione's stepdad? And then 'offered' for Jane to come back to his house to stay with him and Hermione? Stay at his house as WHAT exactly? If he's thinking she'll go back to his bed again, she should hex him into the next millenium. *lol* Besides unless somethings happened to NARCISSA, I think both Hermione and her mom's lives are going to be absolutely misrerable inside the Malfoy home if they have to live in the same home as Lucious' WIFE, who's probably going to be pissed that her HUSBAND not only brought his illegitamate daughter into HER home, BUT also brought the girls mother as well, after killing the daughters stepdad. *lol*
Okay, what does Lucious mean by Jane will be his again as well as Hermione when he killed Hermione's stepdad? And then 'offered' for Jane to come back to his house to stay with him and Hermione? Stay at his house as WHAT exactly? If he's thinking she'll go back to his bed again, she should hex him into the next millenium. *lol* Besides unless somethings happened to NARCISSA, I think both Hermione and her mom's lives are going to be absolutely misrerable inside the Malfoy home if they have to live in the same home as Lucious' WIFE, who's probably going to be pissed that her HUSBAND not only brought his illegitamate daughter into HER home, BUT also brought the girls mother as well, after killing the daughters stepdad. *lol*
6/27/2011 c3 Sakura Lisel
Hermione should punch Draco's lights out again like she did back in their second or third year for that 'if I knew you were my sister, you think I would have LET you start dating Harry Potter' crack. Draco's known Hermione for HOW LONG, and the git REALLY thinks that finding out that Hermione is really his OLDER sister (she IS older isn't she? Depending on how long it took Lucious to marry Narcissa and get her pregnant with Draco after breaking up with Hermione's mom, how many months older is Hermione when compared to Draco's age? *lol*) that Hermione's going to let him get away with trying to tell HER who she'll date or not? Besides, she's got senority in this brother/sister deal, so she doesn't have to listen to him if she doesn't want to. *lol*
Hermione should punch Draco's lights out again like she did back in their second or third year for that 'if I knew you were my sister, you think I would have LET you start dating Harry Potter' crack. Draco's known Hermione for HOW LONG, and the git REALLY thinks that finding out that Hermione is really his OLDER sister (she IS older isn't she? Depending on how long it took Lucious to marry Narcissa and get her pregnant with Draco after breaking up with Hermione's mom, how many months older is Hermione when compared to Draco's age? *lol*) that Hermione's going to let him get away with trying to tell HER who she'll date or not? Besides, she's got senority in this brother/sister deal, so she doesn't have to listen to him if she doesn't want to. *lol*
6/27/2011 c13 UrSisFromFL3
3 aww lol excellent as always miss you :) ill send u what i have of hermione/tom 1 i have as soon as i find my notebook XD lol
3 aww lol excellent as always miss you :) ill send u what i have of hermione/tom 1 i have as soon as i find my notebook XD lol
6/27/2011 c13 CuteHarmony
That was amazing. I oved the story can't wait for more of them.
That was amazing. I oved the story can't wait for more of them.
6/23/2011 c12 UrSisFromFL3
awesome! excellent as always...but whats going to happen lo lucius...tecnecally he was on vvoldemorts side still...
awesome! excellent as always...but whats going to happen lo lucius...tecnecally he was on vvoldemorts side still...
4/26/2011 c11 Rose
I found this story today and i love it, i hope you'll update really soon.
I found this story today and i love it, i hope you'll update really soon.
11/24/2010 c10 HermionePotter1124
hi plese don't let this story end i really really like this story a big thing Family:because the baby and hermione is a malfoy lllll can't even say their last names anyway please never never finish this story bye :)
hi plese don't let this story end i really really like this story a big thing Family:because the baby and hermione is a malfoy lllll can't even say their last names anyway please never never finish this story bye :)
8/20/2010 c10 TheMoreSmutTheBetter
If Hermione is going to be pregnant (which she is), I'm glad that Harry is the father... lucky girl. ;~D
I love the plot twist of Jane's sister's husband being none other than Professor Snape... fantastic. =D
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'"Will you help us plan it Aunt Jean and Professor will you do the honor of marring us."' ["marring" ought to be "marrying". Also, was Hermione asking Professor Snape or Professor Dumbledore to officiate the wedding?]
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'"Yes well my mother was not there for me that much yes she loved me but It was always about her. Your Mum is different she treats me as her own child."' [I think that it is brilliant that Draco accepts Hermione's mother as his own.]
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I'm looking forward to Harry and Hermione getting married.
Seeing as the story is "Rated: M", will there be any lemons between Harry and Hermione? If not, then I believe that this story ought to be "Rated: T" instead.
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I'm enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters. Take care and enjoy the rest of the summer.
=D
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Multiple errors found including missing words, misspelled words, incorrect word usage, and missing punctuation too. Too many to mention in a review without it looking like I'm nagging you.
If Hermione is going to be pregnant (which she is), I'm glad that Harry is the father... lucky girl. ;~D
I love the plot twist of Jane's sister's husband being none other than Professor Snape... fantastic. =D
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'"Will you help us plan it Aunt Jean and Professor will you do the honor of marring us."' ["marring" ought to be "marrying". Also, was Hermione asking Professor Snape or Professor Dumbledore to officiate the wedding?]
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'"Yes well my mother was not there for me that much yes she loved me but It was always about her. Your Mum is different she treats me as her own child."' [I think that it is brilliant that Draco accepts Hermione's mother as his own.]
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I'm looking forward to Harry and Hermione getting married.
Seeing as the story is "Rated: M", will there be any lemons between Harry and Hermione? If not, then I believe that this story ought to be "Rated: T" instead.
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I'm enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters. Take care and enjoy the rest of the summer.
=D
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Multiple errors found including missing words, misspelled words, incorrect word usage, and missing punctuation too. Too many to mention in a review without it looking like I'm nagging you.
8/20/2010 c9 TheMoreSmutTheBetter
'"Mum, no, he will kill you if I leave I could not take that after I have just lost dad."
A look of hurt came across Lucius face. Knowing that he was the one who had caused his only daughter to have pain.' [Good! I'm glad that he finally realizes what a horrible thing he had done to have murdered her father for his own selfish gains.]
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'"Ok as long as everyone is safe, I will not be the reason that someone is killed or worse hurt,"' [Hmm, she believes that getting hurt is worse than being killed? I, myself, believe just the opposite.]
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*::cackling::* OMG, Lucius' reaction to finding out that Hermione is no longer a virgin is too freaking funny. At least she and Harry have had at least one time together before Voldemort puts a stop to their relationship.
;~D
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Nice suspenseful ending there.
=)
'"Mum, no, he will kill you if I leave I could not take that after I have just lost dad."
A look of hurt came across Lucius face. Knowing that he was the one who had caused his only daughter to have pain.' [Good! I'm glad that he finally realizes what a horrible thing he had done to have murdered her father for his own selfish gains.]
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'"Ok as long as everyone is safe, I will not be the reason that someone is killed or worse hurt,"' [Hmm, she believes that getting hurt is worse than being killed? I, myself, believe just the opposite.]
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*::cackling::* OMG, Lucius' reaction to finding out that Hermione is no longer a virgin is too freaking funny. At least she and Harry have had at least one time together before Voldemort puts a stop to their relationship.
;~D
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Nice suspenseful ending there.
=)