for delicious yuuki9/7/2021 c15 Lori Baker
WOW I LOVED IT WRITE MORE FOR THESE 2 I WILL DEFINATLY READ THEM IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ONE!
WOW I LOVED IT WRITE MORE FOR THESE 2 I WILL DEFINATLY READ THEM IF THEY ARE ANYTHING LIKE THIS ONE!
12/18/2014 c14 Guest
Type your review for this chapter here...
Type your review for this chapter here...
9/28/2013 c6 Guest
Un poquito corto ¿No?
Un poquito corto ¿No?
4/5/2013 c15 Nonofyourbuisnes
It's great keep writing:)
It's great keep writing:)
811/27/2012 c15 moonprincess4ever
i will be following 2 see any new posts or stories about yuuki and kaname!
i will be following 2 see any new posts or stories about yuuki and kaname!
8/29/2012 c11 PrincessAmioKi
You know you really do need to GROW the HECK up. Real writers write for themselves and no one else. To actually "blackmail" your readers so that you actually finish your own work is childish. Try that in the real world and see how far you get, NOWHERE. And, personally, I don't want to pay for you sorry BUTT when you can't find a job because no boss will put with this type of thing. Oh, and guess what "child," I am published. Like in a book, with a publisher and everything and why don't you try telling them, I won't finish my chapters unless you praise me. Yea, right, that would go over real well since you have a legal obligation to finish the work or you go to court. WAKE UP and face reality.
You know you really do need to GROW the HECK up. Real writers write for themselves and no one else. To actually "blackmail" your readers so that you actually finish your own work is childish. Try that in the real world and see how far you get, NOWHERE. And, personally, I don't want to pay for you sorry BUTT when you can't find a job because no boss will put with this type of thing. Oh, and guess what "child," I am published. Like in a book, with a publisher and everything and why don't you try telling them, I won't finish my chapters unless you praise me. Yea, right, that would go over real well since you have a legal obligation to finish the work or you go to court. WAKE UP and face reality.
8/6/2012 c8 ellie-elizabeth
three things
1. that was pretty hot!
2. the way he always calls her "my dear" makes him sound like the big bad wolf out of little red riding hood
3. nice puns in the first paragraph
three things
1. that was pretty hot!
2. the way he always calls her "my dear" makes him sound like the big bad wolf out of little red riding hood
3. nice puns in the first paragraph
3/9/2012 c8 Megster
In this fanfic Kaname sounds really perverted. Isn't his character supposed to be something like a beast inside and really apathetic outside? Nothing is wrong with Yuuki in my opinion. I love the way you portrayed her! 3
In this fanfic Kaname sounds really perverted. Isn't his character supposed to be something like a beast inside and really apathetic outside? Nothing is wrong with Yuuki in my opinion. I love the way you portrayed her! 3
8/22/2011 c15 MissyMinxx
I think that Kaname is to possessive of Yuuki to let Zero in a threesome with them. But I like the story :)
I think that Kaname is to possessive of Yuuki to let Zero in a threesome with them. But I like the story :)
2/21/2011 c15 Byakua's sakura petal
that was damn good but next story I think you should go into the vampire hypnotizing thing plus more bondage that would spice it up a bit...but I thought this story was awesome and I shall add you as a favorite author...peace
that was damn good but next story I think you should go into the vampire hypnotizing thing plus more bondage that would spice it up a bit...but I thought this story was awesome and I shall add you as a favorite author...peace