for delicious yuuki1/12/2009 c11 Em
The story would be better if you checked the grammar more often...
But all in all a pretty good story. :)
The story would be better if you checked the grammar more often...
But all in all a pretty good story. :)
1/12/2009 c11 noname
meanie wanna find out what happens next ! good plot line i would work on captilazing the names only
meanie wanna find out what happens next ! good plot line i would work on captilazing the names only
1/12/2009 c11 Ack
Here's a review! Great job in torturing people. More, please?
Here's a review! Great job in torturing people. More, please?
1/12/2009 c11 ano
porque te gusta torturarnos bu los capitulos son muy buenos pero muy cortos
porque te gusta torturarnos bu los capitulos son muy buenos pero muy cortos
1/11/2009 c11 
26Sighned-Anonymous
yeah but you have 51, or now 52, so update. - A
Yeah, maybe you should write more chapters and update slower. idk. update soon. - N
A and N
26Sighned-Anonymousyeah but you have 51, or now 52, so update. - A
Yeah, maybe you should write more chapters and update slower. idk. update soon. - N
A and N
1/11/2009 c11 Ananka767
OMG!I cant find the words to describe this story:it is incredible!Kaname is so...!I want him right now!Please, update the next chapter sooner.
OMG!I cant find the words to describe this story:it is incredible!Kaname is so...!I want him right now!Please, update the next chapter sooner.
1/11/2009 c11 UniQueMimI O.B.S.E.S.S.I.O.N
Im just reviewing cuz i love ur story!Now hurry and update ok!
Im just reviewing cuz i love ur story!Now hurry and update ok!
1/11/2009 c11 amba
please i want to read more your so awesome
please i want to read more your so awesome
1/11/2009 c11 5aeonreclipse
are you kidding epolpe REVIEW GOD!
sorry...I love your story really I do so...you know what i'm just gonna find some chapters I didn't comment on and comment again! I found a loop whole!
beside your lucky I have a story w/ 28 chapters and only 99 comments your on chapter 11 with 43 comments!
5aeonreclipseare you kidding epolpe REVIEW GOD!
sorry...I love your story really I do so...you know what i'm just gonna find some chapters I didn't comment on and comment again! I found a loop whole!
beside your lucky I have a story w/ 28 chapters and only 99 comments your on chapter 11 with 43 comments!