for Vampire Seductress6/1/2021 c16 wavey champ
As reading this story, it taking way too long for Bella to tell Edward she pregnant. She not even being honest about the pregnancy. She stalling and can end badly for not saying about the pregnancy.
As reading this story, it taking way too long for Bella to tell Edward she pregnant. She not even being honest about the pregnancy. She stalling and can end badly for not saying about the pregnancy.
5/4/2019 c1 DawnScarlet19610
Bella is clearly self obsessed. Right from the start it's all about making guys want her. Very unattractive character.
Bella is clearly self obsessed. Right from the start it's all about making guys want her. Very unattractive character.
10/27/2017 c4 Guest
Ok so she is doing the exact same thing she did with mark but now with edward. I loved her in the beginning now im slowly starting to hate her. Insta lust believed to be insta love is always annoying especially when they start "stong" and "confident" your stong confident bella is becoming like canon bella quickly. Except not as smart. hell canon bella found out quick. she dated a vamp for a yr and didnt know so this bella is slow or stupid but i could handle that if she was strong and confident which she started as but quickly losing those qualitys and its only chapter 4. I have a feeling this is gonna be a story i get pissed of with and cant stomach to finish. Hate when people dont learn from their mistakes and continuously make them, again and again, all while giving everything for one person. Which I know thats "teenage romance" but shit she grew up taking care of her mom she is suppose to be mature he is fucking old this shouldnt be a typical teen romance that is exactly what i hated abt the canon
Ok so she is doing the exact same thing she did with mark but now with edward. I loved her in the beginning now im slowly starting to hate her. Insta lust believed to be insta love is always annoying especially when they start "stong" and "confident" your stong confident bella is becoming like canon bella quickly. Except not as smart. hell canon bella found out quick. she dated a vamp for a yr and didnt know so this bella is slow or stupid but i could handle that if she was strong and confident which she started as but quickly losing those qualitys and its only chapter 4. I have a feeling this is gonna be a story i get pissed of with and cant stomach to finish. Hate when people dont learn from their mistakes and continuously make them, again and again, all while giving everything for one person. Which I know thats "teenage romance" but shit she grew up taking care of her mom she is suppose to be mature he is fucking old this shouldnt be a typical teen romance that is exactly what i hated abt the canon
10/11/2017 c1 Guest
Women sound so stupid! Everytime i woman does or says something cocky its perfect or the best story they ever read, but when a guy does the samething he is the worst thing ever to y'all! hypocrite much? Or sexist or feminst all rolled up into one.
Women sound so stupid! Everytime i woman does or says something cocky its perfect or the best story they ever read, but when a guy does the samething he is the worst thing ever to y'all! hypocrite much? Or sexist or feminst all rolled up into one.
10/25/2016 c3 Guest
Ok just stop reading...Bella ..not a virgin? If they both are human..i don't mind...but..fuck it I'm done..
Ok just stop reading...Bella ..not a virgin? If they both are human..i don't mind...but..fuck it I'm done..
5/13/2016 c2 jk
God could you make bella anymore fucktarded?People are always shocked when they hear that I like to dance ballet! yaaaaaaaa its super duper "shocking"
oh and did I mention that I'm the most bestest ever dancer? yaaaaa when I dance all the guys jaws just drop right to the floor! they like drool too! yaaaa I'm soooo amazing...
seriously, this is how bella comes off to me
and then on top of that bullshit you have her talk in her sleep? cold hands, songlike voice...hes an angel!
LOL
Edward would fucking hate this bella if he could read her thoughts...HATE HER...be like lauran much?
God could you make bella anymore fucktarded?People are always shocked when they hear that I like to dance ballet! yaaaaaaaa its super duper "shocking"
oh and did I mention that I'm the most bestest ever dancer? yaaaaa when I dance all the guys jaws just drop right to the floor! they like drool too! yaaaa I'm soooo amazing...
seriously, this is how bella comes off to me
and then on top of that bullshit you have her talk in her sleep? cold hands, songlike voice...hes an angel!
LOL
Edward would fucking hate this bella if he could read her thoughts...HATE HER...be like lauran much?
5/13/2016 c1 jk
bella a fucking stupid cunt.
That whole...this is gonna be sooooo easy. Like lifes a fucking game and shes gonna "win"...its sad that someone can be that stupid...Dame shame too cause this could have been a good story, but you should really slim down on the COCKY bella...she can be beautiful and bad without being a stupid bitch ya know? and if she was cool...she wouldn't have to try so fucking hard! and boy is she trying hard...pathetic cunt
bella a fucking stupid cunt.
That whole...this is gonna be sooooo easy. Like lifes a fucking game and shes gonna "win"...its sad that someone can be that stupid...Dame shame too cause this could have been a good story, but you should really slim down on the COCKY bella...she can be beautiful and bad without being a stupid bitch ya know? and if she was cool...she wouldn't have to try so fucking hard! and boy is she trying hard...pathetic cunt
10/22/2015 c6 Lania
I wish I had gotten to read this when it first came onto the website. So far, this is the latest chapter I have read. I wonder if Mark is trying to steal Bella back?!
I wish I had gotten to read this when it first came onto the website. So far, this is the latest chapter I have read. I wonder if Mark is trying to steal Bella back?!
2/12/2015 c9 Guest
This Bella is the most moronic Bella of all times! ... Seriously, what the heck is she playing?
This Bella is the most moronic Bella of all times! ... Seriously, what the heck is she playing?
12/3/2013 c17 miriama
I so need to smack Edward (dickward) upside of his head grrrrrrrrrrrr
I so need to smack Edward (dickward) upside of his head grrrrrrrrrrrr
7/16/2012 c28 Guest
It's amazing how much easier this is to read when they're both not acting like idiots.
(Thank Goodness fanfic finally turned off the default fav story & author settings!)
It's amazing how much easier this is to read when they're both not acting like idiots.
(Thank Goodness fanfic finally turned off the default fav story & author settings!)
7/16/2012 c29 blb1000
Two things: Why don't they live in her house together so they can both be with the kids? And, will Tanya be invited to their wedding? That should be interesting!
Two things: Why don't they live in her house together so they can both be with the kids? And, will Tanya be invited to their wedding? That should be interesting!