for Tears and Rain9/6/2011 c11 MiscellaneousTopics
Great, it had the perfect dosage of fluff, angst, and comfort. The whole Roy torture thing was a little much but it did make Envy more in character. Extra points for having a little cliffhanger (well not really but it's keeps it open for a sequel :D) in general I just loved this story so much.
Great, it had the perfect dosage of fluff, angst, and comfort. The whole Roy torture thing was a little much but it did make Envy more in character. Extra points for having a little cliffhanger (well not really but it's keeps it open for a sequel :D) in general I just loved this story so much.
8/1/2011 c11 Ex-Pirate
Is it bad that I was extremely happy when Roy died I don't know why people like him I've always hated him in the anime and manga :/ don't know why tho there's just something about him that I don't like 'bout him but I can't place my fingers on it
Is it bad that I was extremely happy when Roy died I don't know why people like him I've always hated him in the anime and manga :/ don't know why tho there's just something about him that I don't like 'bout him but I can't place my fingers on it
3/9/2011 c11 
6Lunesti
I must say, this was an amazing story! Albeit, a little shorter than I would have made it, but really good! I'm glad to find a good Ed/Envy fic out there that's not all angst and whatnot. In fact, this one had just the right amount of fluff and angst and torture in it to sate just about any reader. Honestly, great job! I loved it!
6LunestiI must say, this was an amazing story! Albeit, a little shorter than I would have made it, but really good! I'm glad to find a good Ed/Envy fic out there that's not all angst and whatnot. In fact, this one had just the right amount of fluff and angst and torture in it to sate just about any reader. Honestly, great job! I loved it!
2/15/2011 c5 7pandas'n'kisses
Excuse amwah i do not comprehend d-did just umm MURDER MY POOR MUSTANG sob
7pandas'n'kissesExcuse amwah i do not comprehend d-did just umm MURDER MY POOR MUSTANG sob
1/11/2011 c11 6RomiofAmestria
That was amazing! I love this story so much! And that last line "Where we go from here, well, I guess I'll see it when I get there." Is absolutely perfect!
6RomiofAmestriaThat was amazing! I love this story so much! And that last line "Where we go from here, well, I guess I'll see it when I get there." Is absolutely perfect!
1/11/2011 c6 RomiofAmestria
I like seeing Mustang as the bad guy even though I love him so much. Although, seeing Ed stuttering pulls on my heart strings. A lot, almost to the point of crying.
I like seeing Mustang as the bad guy even though I love him so much. Although, seeing Ed stuttering pulls on my heart strings. A lot, almost to the point of crying.
12/17/2010 c11 5EchoRoses
oh cool riza got promoted to colonel and roy's dead! :does happy dance: what a great epilougue and i loved this story now you got me hooked on edxenvy :P
5EchoRosesoh cool riza got promoted to colonel and roy's dead! :does happy dance: what a great epilougue and i loved this story now you got me hooked on edxenvy :P
11/11/2010 c11 1AyameRose
I LIKE IT!... but it would b cool if u continued it on... *pout* to sort *pout*
1AyameRoseI LIKE IT!... but it would b cool if u continued it on... *pout* to sort *pout*
8/22/2010 c4 8Bloodypleasures
Well he's kind of hurt, and his right arm is lying in a corner, without him attached to it.
lol very subtle envy 3
8BloodypleasuresWell he's kind of hurt, and his right arm is lying in a corner, without him attached to it.
lol very subtle envy 3
7/23/2010 c11 36The-Wyld-October
I'm not big on reviewing after the fact as far as fanfics go, that is to say, if they're already done, I leave 'em be, but this one was so good, I couldn't resist. You portrayed Envy perfectly and you worked everything out to a T. I am usually not a huge supporter of evil!Mustang, but hey, you made it work.
Kudos to you!
36The-Wyld-OctoberI'm not big on reviewing after the fact as far as fanfics go, that is to say, if they're already done, I leave 'em be, but this one was so good, I couldn't resist. You portrayed Envy perfectly and you worked everything out to a T. I am usually not a huge supporter of evil!Mustang, but hey, you made it work.
Kudos to you!