for Tears and Rain12/22/2008 c4 lalalalala
i love this story i vote same old self
i love this story i vote same old self
12/21/2008 c4 
4YukinoKara
8D Nice chapter, I don't know how to say how fun this is to read and how much I love this story in each review without sounding monotonous or boring xD
I think Mustang should stay as the evil bas.tard though the whole story, I think it makes more sense that way =D Besides; it's not like Edward would ever trust him again anyway.
Well written chapter, it's so nice to read a good Edvy story with good grammar (it's been so long I've come to EXPECT bad grammar).
Good luck with later chapters!
~YukinoKara, the hurting monster
4YukinoKara8D Nice chapter, I don't know how to say how fun this is to read and how much I love this story in each review without sounding monotonous or boring xD
I think Mustang should stay as the evil bas.tard though the whole story, I think it makes more sense that way =D Besides; it's not like Edward would ever trust him again anyway.
Well written chapter, it's so nice to read a good Edvy story with good grammar (it's been so long I've come to EXPECT bad grammar).
Good luck with later chapters!
~YukinoKara, the hurting monster
12/21/2008 c4 4Ria442
Nice chapter...shorter than the last, but still excellent. Well update when you can and... that was a really quick update. YAY! ^^
4Ria442Nice chapter...shorter than the last, but still excellent. Well update when you can and... that was a really quick update. YAY! ^^
12/21/2008 c3 13mrawgirl09
Heh... That... I like.. Evil Mustang... Although I think he's being WAY too obsessed with Paperwork which I KNOW he hates completing... But then it might be simply be the lust that he's having of Edward and just took a wrong turn... 8D You know, that first paragraph there made me think about what if Envy did NOT feel sympathy for Ed and instead agreed on killing him? XDD Maybe I should write this down! XD Do you mind if I start the same? I'll disclaim that part.. 8D If not, I'll try to think of a different situation where Ed might have a grudge on Mustang... Oh wait.. nevermind. I got an idea. *w*
13mrawgirl09Heh... That... I like.. Evil Mustang... Although I think he's being WAY too obsessed with Paperwork which I KNOW he hates completing... But then it might be simply be the lust that he's having of Edward and just took a wrong turn... 8D You know, that first paragraph there made me think about what if Envy did NOT feel sympathy for Ed and instead agreed on killing him? XDD Maybe I should write this down! XD Do you mind if I start the same? I'll disclaim that part.. 8D If not, I'll try to think of a different situation where Ed might have a grudge on Mustang... Oh wait.. nevermind. I got an idea. *w*
12/21/2008 c3 4YukinoKara
8D I love this chapter so much, and I have no idea why! XD
I really like this story, it's capturing my interest so fast!
I think I'll go read the story again XD
Good luck with later chapters.
~YukinoKara, the mentally-hyper monster
4YukinoKara8D I love this chapter so much, and I have no idea why! XD
I really like this story, it's capturing my interest so fast!
I think I'll go read the story again XD
Good luck with later chapters.
~YukinoKara, the mentally-hyper monster
12/21/2008 c2 YukinoKara
For some reason I remember this story as one with bad grammar. Well, after reading this chapter, that thought's out the proverbial window!
Great chapter, I like how you woke them up without making them seem very out of character =D
Off to read the next chapter XD
~YukinoKara
For some reason I remember this story as one with bad grammar. Well, after reading this chapter, that thought's out the proverbial window!
Great chapter, I like how you woke them up without making them seem very out of character =D
Off to read the next chapter XD
~YukinoKara
12/20/2008 c3 4Ria442
Aww...poor Ed ...er...Chibi. One question...is Roy dead? If he is then good redance, but if he is alive still, then he is sure gonna wake up with some headache. I love the story so far and update when you can. Poor Ed being raped.
4Ria442Aww...poor Ed ...er...Chibi. One question...is Roy dead? If he is then good redance, but if he is alive still, then he is sure gonna wake up with some headache. I love the story so far and update when you can. Poor Ed being raped.
12/20/2008 c3 3CrimsonWolfDemon
Ah poor Eddy. But yay Envy came in and saved the day and ed. I know have a desire to kill mustang. update soon please
3CrimsonWolfDemonAh poor Eddy. But yay Envy came in and saved the day and ed. I know have a desire to kill mustang. update soon please
12/20/2008 c1 hugesandkisses1
great first chapter! sad, but really good! update soon! cant wait to see what happens next!
great first chapter! sad, but really good! update soon! cant wait to see what happens next!
12/19/2008 c1 1WaywardAF
Hey Kaeli! I love this! its amazing and ur an amazing author. U really describe the pain that Ed feels.
1WaywardAFHey Kaeli! I love this! its amazing and ur an amazing author. U really describe the pain that Ed feels.
12/19/2008 c1 4YukinoKara
O.O This looks very good so far!
Nice grammar, too.
I look forward to updates XD
~YukinoKara, the insane monster
4YukinoKaraO.O This looks very good so far!
Nice grammar, too.
I look forward to updates XD
~YukinoKara, the insane monster