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2/17/2020 c15 1Calmzone1
And you have to love autocorrect. I typed though and it came out as thought! Sigh. I just wanted to make sure some of the things got caught before the rewrite.

Good job so far on both.

Sadly, I’m not familiar with Gundam other than through HP crossovers,Mobutu the characters seem to be meshing well. I can’t wait to see how you’re going to handle Ron’s and Hermione’s attitudes towards Harry, and is Ginny going to be fangirl or not? Ahe really is, and dreams of marriage to the boy who lived, only seeing the fame, not the person. I can see the 5 spotting her coming a mile away, let alone Quatre getting a reading from her.
2/17/2020 c14 Calmzone1
So, in your rewrite, I would suggest that after Harry has the vision and Duo is staying with him, you have Sirius and Remus reluctant to leave The-Boy-Who-Lived...nope, they were reluctant to leave their Godson! Or is he just TBWL to them?
And right after instead of hard look from the Prussian Blue depths, what about hard look from his intent or intense eyes? No colour description required. It just throws your brain off trying to remember what colour Prussian Blue is. XD

Great chapter thought.
2/17/2020 c9 Calmzone1
Ok, why did Harry or Hermione not react with eye rolls, snorts of laughter or words when Dumbledore says that he cannot condone using the school as bait, that it is meant to be safe! ‘Yeah right! Or a scoffing noise, choked laughter, what! Since when?’ Every year but 3rd
2/16/2020 c5 Calmzone1
Just fyi...reeking smelly garbage, dead fish, rotten eggs etc. Wreaking wreaking havoc, creating chaos. :)
2/16/2020 c2 Calmzone1
Just a note, that it is actually ‘another think coming, not another thing.’ It is a bit confusing having both points of view, rather than just one. I wasn’t sure if there was just a repetition error, and then realized it was POV. :)
2/11/2020 c16 P. Cythera
looking forward to the rewrite
2/11/2020 c16 P. Cythera
looking forward to the rewrite
2/10/2020 c11 2liza123
Eating dinner while I read the last sentence. Almost swallowed the we wrong way due to laughing. Thanks for the fun in your tale
2/9/2020 c16 bloodysilverfox
Yay! I cant wait!
2/8/2020 c16 Guest
I’ve missed your GW/HP work so much! This is the best news ever!
10/15/2019 c15 Anonymous1243
I always have enjoyed your reconstruction-arc stories I regret that you feel uninspired in this one, it was one of my favorites.
Although I will keep an eye on the other ones )
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3/28/2019 c15 WinterTigerEclipse
Love the story very awesome and if u do a rewrite please don't forget about it part way through happened to other stories I favorites was my favor2 they never caught up to where it was before they did only have memories of what I reaf
3/5/2019 c12 Guest
*laughter* What a reaction, Siri! This sort of thing is why I was choking on cackles earlier...
3/5/2019 c11 Guest
*chokes cackling*
3/5/2019 c7 Guest
WUFEI KEEPS A SWORD IN THE UMBRELLA STAND.

This is... mind-boggling. I mean, he's got a specialty, so he should use it, it makes sense. But. Chang Wufei. With a sword. In the Umbrella Stand. It's so practical, yet I can easily see serious swordsmen throwing a shitfit over the disrespectful implications. And yet, Wufei is actually calm sensible and practical enough to actually embrace the option.
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