for Fated4/8/2012 c2 
1SellTheeSoul4Bacon
Why havn't you updated? I think you've got a good story and that you should continue! The only thing I can really think of that you've done wrong is small mistakes. LIke typos, run on sentences, and repitition (I think I spelled that wrong). My bad.
1SellTheeSoul4BaconWhy havn't you updated? I think you've got a good story and that you should continue! The only thing I can really think of that you've done wrong is small mistakes. LIke typos, run on sentences, and repitition (I think I spelled that wrong). My bad.
2/11/2012 c2 13CleverChaos
Please, Please, PLEASE! Update this story. It is so good and has huge potential. I'm begging you to continue this! It is a great story!
13CleverChaosPlease, Please, PLEASE! Update this story. It is so good and has huge potential. I'm begging you to continue this! It is a great story!
4/22/2011 c2 Pixiegirl
Love it so far. Keep writing please.
Love it so far. Keep writing please.
2/25/2009 c1 Sara
This was amazing! Good job!
This was amazing! Good job!
2/16/2009 c2 9CoffeeBiscotti
Hey!
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying the hunter/morgan moments that you're creating here.
I absolutely hated that they were separated in night's child. Defiantly didn't do hunter's character justice! He should have been there for everything. You've actually inspired and idea and i think i might succumb to actually posting some of my own stories. I usually keep all but my original creations to myself. I hope you'll keep updating. =]
9CoffeeBiscottiHey!
Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying the hunter/morgan moments that you're creating here.
I absolutely hated that they were separated in night's child. Defiantly didn't do hunter's character justice! He should have been there for everything. You've actually inspired and idea and i think i might succumb to actually posting some of my own stories. I usually keep all but my original creations to myself. I hope you'll keep updating. =]
2/7/2009 c1 Qwerty
OMG i love it! your better than most writers in this website. i thought it was just cruel to take away her DIET COKE! when i read the actual book i practicly had a heart attack when Hunter died! hes my favorite charector in the entire series. and personally i think the sweep series is better than the twilight series. but i still love twilight!
THIS STORY IS THE BEST SCINCE ONLY HUMAN THAT I"VE READ AND I"VE READ LOT OF STORIES
OMG i love it! your better than most writers in this website. i thought it was just cruel to take away her DIET COKE! when i read the actual book i practicly had a heart attack when Hunter died! hes my favorite charector in the entire series. and personally i think the sweep series is better than the twilight series. but i still love twilight!
THIS STORY IS THE BEST SCINCE ONLY HUMAN THAT I"VE READ AND I"VE READ LOT OF STORIES
1/15/2009 c2 book babe1990
Wow!
I can't wait to see where this story goes
I love the sweep series, and this is always what i hoped would happen in the books, instead of what did happen lol
keep wiriting
X X X X
Wow!
I can't wait to see where this story goes
I love the sweep series, and this is always what i hoped would happen in the books, instead of what did happen lol
keep wiriting
X X X X
1/8/2009 c2 10The Blasphemous Contessa
I love this story, you're a really good writer, jusst watch out for the typos there were a couple in both chapters. I can't wait to read what comes next
10The Blasphemous ContessaI love this story, you're a really good writer, jusst watch out for the typos there were a couple in both chapters. I can't wait to read what comes next
1/5/2009 c2 6Kates Master's Sister
O, I'm liking the look of this. Any chance of an update?
You know, I'm so glad to have found a fellow Twilight/Wicca fan. Do you find Edward and Hunter really similar? Like, Stephanie-Meyer-SO-read-these-before-writing-Twilight, similar?
Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Edward, really I do. And Hunter too. But yeah. I'm curious.
Anyway.
Likin it so far! Update son!
Beth
6Kates Master's SisterO, I'm liking the look of this. Any chance of an update?
You know, I'm so glad to have found a fellow Twilight/Wicca fan. Do you find Edward and Hunter really similar? Like, Stephanie-Meyer-SO-read-these-before-writing-Twilight, similar?
Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Edward, really I do. And Hunter too. But yeah. I'm curious.
Anyway.
Likin it so far! Update son!
Beth