for His Lips3/24/2018 c1 Lily
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3/30/2014 c1 
3berry5tz
This was very well written. I enjoyed this one-shot immensely.
Thanks for writing it!
3berry5tzThis was very well written. I enjoyed this one-shot immensely.
Thanks for writing it!
3/4/2014 c1 1LouiseUchiha
I really felt the angst of Naruto when he reached the hospitals room.
I was like... wait what!?
1LouiseUchihaI really felt the angst of Naruto when he reached the hospitals room.
I was like... wait what!?
6/17/2012 c1 2SilverLining501
it's your best story so far. You captured quite accurately the confusion and uncertainty of those two's feelings.
2SilverLining501it's your best story so far. You captured quite accurately the confusion and uncertainty of those two's feelings.
1/3/2012 c1 5Marinaa.8
Lovely story :)
I like how you portrayed Sasuke and how his character is worked out. He seems like he would be like this in real life.
I tought Sasuke was dead when I read the part with the towel, thank god you didn't do that. I always get really sad from deathfics, but your story is really happy.
Keep up the good work!
5Marinaa.8Lovely story :)
I like how you portrayed Sasuke and how his character is worked out. He seems like he would be like this in real life.
I tought Sasuke was dead when I read the part with the towel, thank god you didn't do that. I always get really sad from deathfics, but your story is really happy.
Keep up the good work!
2/18/2009 c1 19NoNameNeeded
Aww... This was SO good. I like the way in which you portrayed Sasuke, very nice! -claps-
I was wondering what was wrong with Sasuke, but then when it was explained, I was like "wow", I'd never have guessed that and it... finished Sasuke's character...? Not sure if that was the right way to describe it. And I was SO scared when Naruto came into the room and found the towel on Sasuke's face, I actually thought that he was DEAD! AH!
19NoNameNeededAww... This was SO good. I like the way in which you portrayed Sasuke, very nice! -claps-
I was wondering what was wrong with Sasuke, but then when it was explained, I was like "wow", I'd never have guessed that and it... finished Sasuke's character...? Not sure if that was the right way to describe it. And I was SO scared when Naruto came into the room and found the towel on Sasuke's face, I actually thought that he was DEAD! AH!
12/28/2008 c1 2SilentKiller1
man i would have punched the crap out of him 2 glad it went okay in the end
2SilentKiller1man i would have punched the crap out of him 2 glad it went okay in the end
12/28/2008 c1 1WhatMoreDoYouWant
Holy Crap this reminds me of this one yaoi story in a collection called "Beyond My Touch" and the story Itself is called "Cool Lips", would you happen to know what I'm talking about? I'm not mad or trying to accuse you of copying the story, because you changed it and gave it the Naruto flavor all of the people reading this are looking for, which I also enjoyed! But, if you did get this idea from the story I would be so thrilled because I love the stories in "Beyond My Touch" and it would be so cool to know that someone else has read it!
Please message me back, thanks!
1WhatMoreDoYouWantHoly Crap this reminds me of this one yaoi story in a collection called "Beyond My Touch" and the story Itself is called "Cool Lips", would you happen to know what I'm talking about? I'm not mad or trying to accuse you of copying the story, because you changed it and gave it the Naruto flavor all of the people reading this are looking for, which I also enjoyed! But, if you did get this idea from the story I would be so thrilled because I love the stories in "Beyond My Touch" and it would be so cool to know that someone else has read it!
Please message me back, thanks!
12/26/2008 c1 16Crazy PurpleSage
Aw! That was so great! I loved it, Anthoinette! So cute. Sasuke totally reminded me of L. And I love how you left it open - nothing really decided, but you just know.
Ah, it was so great. Awesome story!
Heh, and Icha Icha? You have to be kidding! XD XD XD
So...I can beta it? I love doing your work. It's so much fun! . Your stories are always good: cute and sweet, yet still meanigful and deep. How you pull that off, I don't know. But it works out perfectly. Keep it up! Two thumbs way, way up! ;D
16Crazy PurpleSageAw! That was so great! I loved it, Anthoinette! So cute. Sasuke totally reminded me of L. And I love how you left it open - nothing really decided, but you just know.
Ah, it was so great. Awesome story!
Heh, and Icha Icha? You have to be kidding! XD XD XD
So...I can beta it? I love doing your work. It's so much fun! . Your stories are always good: cute and sweet, yet still meanigful and deep. How you pull that off, I don't know. But it works out perfectly. Keep it up! Two thumbs way, way up! ;D
12/24/2008 c1 65416
MWE! ^_^
So adorable! ^w^ I loved their slow friendship!... and Gods, Naruto! you just cannot do anything against yourself! XD His hyserical moment when he thought Sasu was dead was superb! got me on the edge of my seat since moment one! -thumbs up ;D-
...and GOSH! ...was Sasuke reading Icha Icha..? ^_^ my, oh my... teenagers nowadays xD
Great work as usual, hun! =)
Hope see more of your newfound ideas soon ;D
See yA! ^3^
oh, and Merry X-mas! w
MWE! ^_^
So adorable! ^w^ I loved their slow friendship!... and Gods, Naruto! you just cannot do anything against yourself! XD His hyserical moment when he thought Sasu was dead was superb! got me on the edge of my seat since moment one! -thumbs up ;D-
...and GOSH! ...was Sasuke reading Icha Icha..? ^_^ my, oh my... teenagers nowadays xD
Great work as usual, hun! =)
Hope see more of your newfound ideas soon ;D
See yA! ^3^
oh, and Merry X-mas! w
12/23/2008 c1 midnighttsukihime
hey,great job!I like your story,it's so sweet and cute...
keep up your good work!
hey,great job!I like your story,it's so sweet and cute...
keep up your good work!