for Separate Ways7/27/2010 c4 PJ
Hey, dis one's really nice... i lyked d revenges very much... complete dis story a bit faster coz... lyk curiosity killedd cat, it's killing me also...
(i really lyk d kind of stories in which d main characters start as enemies, turn into frndz n later d friendship flourishes into luv...) :)
Hey, dis one's really nice... i lyked d revenges very much... complete dis story a bit faster coz... lyk curiosity killedd cat, it's killing me also...
(i really lyk d kind of stories in which d main characters start as enemies, turn into frndz n later d friendship flourishes into luv...) :)
6/26/2010 c4 permanentlyinactive9318
Sorry this is taking so long, Twin! Maddy and Dommy sure were misbehaving, were they? LOL!
I loved this chapter! So much detail and drama! Haha! Mitchie sure is baaad, hitting Shane, but he deserved it, haha XD. I hope he becomes good soon :) Oh man I can already feel the chemistry between them! :D
And I love Caitlyn in this! She's a great friend :)
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! :D
Oh, and one pointer though: try not speaking like "u" and "ur"...it;s confusing. Use proper grammar more. :) At least, TRY. :)
Love this story! :)
Sorry this is taking so long, Twin! Maddy and Dommy sure were misbehaving, were they? LOL!
I loved this chapter! So much detail and drama! Haha! Mitchie sure is baaad, hitting Shane, but he deserved it, haha XD. I hope he becomes good soon :) Oh man I can already feel the chemistry between them! :D
And I love Caitlyn in this! She's a great friend :)
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! :D
Oh, and one pointer though: try not speaking like "u" and "ur"...it;s confusing. Use proper grammar more. :) At least, TRY. :)
Love this story! :)
6/26/2010 c2 permanentlyinactive9318
Hey! :)
Wow, I like this! :D Your grammar is iffy, but that is OK, because the story is very interesting regardless! :) I like the idea of Shane being bad and Mitchie being confident with herself-and I can already see the chemistry between the two! Haha! :D
And you are very good at describing how people look! :)
Hey! :)
Wow, I like this! :D Your grammar is iffy, but that is OK, because the story is very interesting regardless! :) I like the idea of Shane being bad and Mitchie being confident with herself-and I can already see the chemistry between the two! Haha! :D
And you are very good at describing how people look! :)
6/26/2010 c1 permanentlyinactive9318
HI, Twin! :)
Here's me reviewing, like I promised! :)
The trailer is...kind of awkward, BUT it is very engaging! :) I'm curious to read more! :D
I'm off to read the next chapter! :)
HI, Twin! :)
Here's me reviewing, like I promised! :)
The trailer is...kind of awkward, BUT it is very engaging! :) I'm curious to read more! :D
I'm off to read the next chapter! :)
6/23/2010 c4 General Lollipop
Oh gosh! I fell in love! :D
I'm glad I read this! :D
You kind of started with a few grammatical and spelling errors, but in this chapter they are better. :)
Keep going, okay, honey? :)
Great chapter! At least your story isn't fast paced. :]
Can't wait for you to continue!
Please update soon! :)
Oh gosh! I fell in love! :D
I'm glad I read this! :D
You kind of started with a few grammatical and spelling errors, but in this chapter they are better. :)
Keep going, okay, honey? :)
Great chapter! At least your story isn't fast paced. :]
Can't wait for you to continue!
Please update soon! :)
4/2/2010 c4 
33Everafterjunkie
Sarah!
Wow, it feels weird to be reviewing for you :P So I read it :D And it was pretty darn good considering it wasn't Channy :P NOOWW I really wanna see your Channy one :D 73 reviews for three chaps? That is so fricking awesome! Like more than me :D Hope you can send me the one-shot or update this soon.
Lots of love, Abbie :)
33EverafterjunkieSarah!
Wow, it feels weird to be reviewing for you :P So I read it :D And it was pretty darn good considering it wasn't Channy :P NOOWW I really wanna see your Channy one :D 73 reviews for three chaps? That is so fricking awesome! Like more than me :D Hope you can send me the one-shot or update this soon.
Lots of love, Abbie :)
4/2/2010 c4 19DemiandSelenaFan
HEY SARAH MY JEMI TWIN!
this is an awesome story! you got 72 reviews for 4 chapters! people must like it! and this makes 73! se you have to continue!
Its awesome and original please?
*puppy dog eyes and pouts*
Jemi will end if u dont... and i dont wanna see that happen:(
please update?
EMMA
(not emily)
also known as jicko (abbie is bad at nicknames!)
or sarah's jemi twin! :D
19DemiandSelenaFanHEY SARAH MY JEMI TWIN!
this is an awesome story! you got 72 reviews for 4 chapters! people must like it! and this makes 73! se you have to continue!
Its awesome and original please?
*puppy dog eyes and pouts*
Jemi will end if u dont... and i dont wanna see that happen:(
please update?
EMMA
(not emily)
also known as jicko (abbie is bad at nicknames!)
or sarah's jemi twin! :D
12/22/2009 c1 5Crazy Awesome Writer
Very good. I love trailers. I just dont know how to make them. :) Haha. There's your review. update soon!
5Crazy Awesome WriterVery good. I love trailers. I just dont know how to make them. :) Haha. There's your review. update soon!
10/23/2009 c4 7heartbreakingXbreathtaking
Hey, I took your advice and checked your story out. I really like it! At first I thought it was a little... I don't know how to put it. Not rushed but I would have wanted more details. Like about the surrounding and stuff. But then when I got into it a little more I begun to appreciate your writing style. Sometimes you get a more real feeling if you don't bother with to many details. And I loved how Mitchie slapped Shane! Go Mitchie!
7heartbreakingXbreathtakingHey, I took your advice and checked your story out. I really like it! At first I thought it was a little... I don't know how to put it. Not rushed but I would have wanted more details. Like about the surrounding and stuff. But then when I got into it a little more I begun to appreciate your writing style. Sometimes you get a more real feeling if you don't bother with to many details. And I loved how Mitchie slapped Shane! Go Mitchie!
10/18/2009 c4 iluvromance
great story! could u please finish it. u r great at writing stories.
great story! could u please finish it. u r great at writing stories.
6/8/2009 c4 2Aoki Rachel
Like I said, AWESOME STORY! haha.. if i could write as smoothly as you do, that will be a mircale :P
Anyway, update soon! :D
2Aoki RachelLike I said, AWESOME STORY! haha.. if i could write as smoothly as you do, that will be a mircale :P
Anyway, update soon! :D