for On the Way to Greatness5h c15 jfliffy
I've enjoyed your story so far. however, the last few chapters have really diminished in quality to what came before. it feels rushed, or less thought out in comparison. i also think it was an odd choice to have your characters backslide in growth. Both Harry and the twins seem to regress aggressively in their maturity levels over the last two chapters. idk if you are just burnt out on the story and crushing to the finish? will give start of year 6 a try, but i think you could've (should've) ended at year 4. would have been a great cliffhanger, start of the resolution has been underwhelming.
I've enjoyed your story so far. however, the last few chapters have really diminished in quality to what came before. it feels rushed, or less thought out in comparison. i also think it was an odd choice to have your characters backslide in growth. Both Harry and the twins seem to regress aggressively in their maturity levels over the last two chapters. idk if you are just burnt out on the story and crushing to the finish? will give start of year 6 a try, but i think you could've (should've) ended at year 4. would have been a great cliffhanger, start of the resolution has been underwhelming.
1/3 c21 
13PineNutPesto
Hey-I've really enjoyed this story. Your version of Harry is intelligent, witty, and likeable. The progression of the plot is perfectly tuned. And I like the writing of the action scenes-I know that's particularly difficult to pace. If there's a continuation of this, I would love to know about it. If there's not, thank you for giving us this!
13PineNutPestoHey-I've really enjoyed this story. Your version of Harry is intelligent, witty, and likeable. The progression of the plot is perfectly tuned. And I like the writing of the action scenes-I know that's particularly difficult to pace. If there's a continuation of this, I would love to know about it. If there's not, thank you for giving us this!
12/29/2024 c3 Volunteer Insomniac
it feels like 30% of this story is missing since i last read it. wheres all the scenes of harry learning magic? theres also a lot of times where it feels like a scen that introduced someone or something has gone missing, like the basilisk, it just shows up after harry learbs hes a parseltongue, but i swear he was hearing it before he knew he was a parseltongue.
it feels like 30% of this story is missing since i last read it. wheres all the scenes of harry learning magic? theres also a lot of times where it feels like a scen that introduced someone or something has gone missing, like the basilisk, it just shows up after harry learbs hes a parseltongue, but i swear he was hearing it before he knew he was a parseltongue.
12/17/2024 c12 Animeworld2.0
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Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I run a YouTube channel called Infinity Harry (Channel link: Infinityharry), where I share fanfiction stories with an audience that prefers listening over reading.
I would like to inform you that my channel is now monetized, and I make sure to give proper credit in the description of your story. Additionally, I will share the video link under your story review for your view. I respect authors and their copyright.
If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am happy to make changes according to your guidance.
I would greatly appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission
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12/1/2024 c21 Guest
Just read the whole thing, absolutely marvelous, simply marvelous! Every chapter kept me entertained, each twist of story kept me guessing and guessing, and the action, wow!
I eagerly await any updates to this story, we are so close to the end!
Just read the whole thing, absolutely marvelous, simply marvelous! Every chapter kept me entertained, each twist of story kept me guessing and guessing, and the action, wow!
I eagerly await any updates to this story, we are so close to the end!
11/6/2024 c10 Darya
Splendid chapter.
Splendid chapter.
11/5/2024 c4 Abstract01
The 'twins vignette' was enlightening on how to deal with moral quandaries that we all experience.
The snake couch is hilarious!
The 'twins vignette' was enlightening on how to deal with moral quandaries that we all experience.
The snake couch is hilarious!
11/5/2024 c9 Darya
Quite thrilling.
Quite thrilling.
11/5/2024 c8 Darya
A good read.
A good read.
11/5/2024 c6 Darya
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11/5/2024 c5 Darya
I have been left satisfied once again.
I have been left satisfied once again.
11/5/2024 c4 Darya
Not what I was expecting, but satisfying nonetheless. Also, I think Harry needs anger management.
As always, love the chapter.
Not what I was expecting, but satisfying nonetheless. Also, I think Harry needs anger management.
As always, love the chapter.