for On the Way to Greatness3/1/2009 c3 fhippogriff
EXCELLENT story.
Favorite line(s): ...A phoenix bird and a tattered hat. Pathetic. I would almost pity you, Potter.”
Harry was inclined to pity himself, actually, not that he was going to show it.
and: Harry could feel it, dimly – the shape of something significant forming out of the interweaving fates of these two awards.
Very nice end of the chapter. Looking forward to more.
EXCELLENT story.
Favorite line(s): ...A phoenix bird and a tattered hat. Pathetic. I would almost pity you, Potter.”
Harry was inclined to pity himself, actually, not that he was going to show it.
and: Harry could feel it, dimly – the shape of something significant forming out of the interweaving fates of these two awards.
Very nice end of the chapter. Looking forward to more.
2/27/2009 c3 Kaylen Cooper
I am really in love with this. I would have to say that this is one of the better rewrites of the Hogwarts years, with a Slytherin!Harry, that I've seen.
I really look forward to reading more. :)
I am really in love with this. I would have to say that this is one of the better rewrites of the Hogwarts years, with a Slytherin!Harry, that I've seen.
I really look forward to reading more. :)
2/26/2009 c3 mouse
i absolutely love this story. it's really well written, i like the format of the story, how you include important scenes and make each year a one shot or two shots.
i also loved the role cedric played, i thought it was nice how you incorporated him in :)
i absolutely love this story. it's really well written, i like the format of the story, how you include important scenes and make each year a one shot or two shots.
i also loved the role cedric played, i thought it was nice how you incorporated him in :)
2/26/2009 c3 
11henriette
oh this is wonderful...hopeing for more soon and a bit darker Harry, but then it's hard to make a 12 year old boy dark so I'm going to darker in thrid year ;d
11henrietteoh this is wonderful...hopeing for more soon and a bit darker Harry, but then it's hard to make a 12 year old boy dark so I'm going to darker in thrid year ;d
2/26/2009 c1 henriette
Im really impresed that you managed to put one year in one chapter without making it rushed!
Im really impresed that you managed to put one year in one chapter without making it rushed!
2/25/2009 c3 RRW
Why was Harry so reluctant to talk about Riddle? Does he not trust the Headmaster and Snape?
Why was Harry so reluctant to talk about Riddle? Does he not trust the Headmaster and Snape?
2/25/2009 c3 Memory King
Hope this teaches Harry to be more aware of his surroundings, and to give as much as he gets.
Not sure about the trio reinvention here, but I liked how you showed that villains don't share in Harry's desire to be left alone. Quality seems constant with what we've already seen, I can only hope that Harry learns to deal with his fate without whining, and keeps up his attitude. Would also be nice to see him grow as a Slytherin, without turning into another Voldemort.
Looking forward to more!
Hope this teaches Harry to be more aware of his surroundings, and to give as much as he gets.
Not sure about the trio reinvention here, but I liked how you showed that villains don't share in Harry's desire to be left alone. Quality seems constant with what we've already seen, I can only hope that Harry learns to deal with his fate without whining, and keeps up his attitude. Would also be nice to see him grow as a Slytherin, without turning into another Voldemort.
Looking forward to more!
2/25/2009 c2 ludpeshko
Well, haven't read the other reviews so I'm probably repeating someone's word but... nice start and good tempo of the story.
You are not going down the road of reforming the "golden trio" and repeat, yet again, the all well known events but skimming through and forming some kind of characterization.
So far, all of the characters lack depth but it's impossible to have both in depth characterization and a fast run over the first years. Anyways for it works fine. I guess you'll be going through the years as fast as you can until you get to the point where you want it to start the real story you had in mind and I'm curious as of where exactly is the plot heading.
Waiting for an updates...
Well, haven't read the other reviews so I'm probably repeating someone's word but... nice start and good tempo of the story.
You are not going down the road of reforming the "golden trio" and repeat, yet again, the all well known events but skimming through and forming some kind of characterization.
So far, all of the characters lack depth but it's impossible to have both in depth characterization and a fast run over the first years. Anyways for it works fine. I guess you'll be going through the years as fast as you can until you get to the point where you want it to start the real story you had in mind and I'm curious as of where exactly is the plot heading.
Waiting for an updates...