for Survivors1/14/2009 c5 
26Girly 411
First off, caves aren't made of cement they're made of rock. teehee...you said Ryan slept on cement all night when he was in a cave of rock! Unless caves are made of cement now. hm...ponders. that's just my little nitpick. sry.
OH! that's so sad that all that was happening and they used to be so close until all that arguing and such. Oh, I hope they become close to each other soon and is Shar gonna be okay? She broke her ankle! NO! Ryan has to save her!
You're making me cry now, char. That's just so sad! luvd the sweet little flashback. it was so cute.
UH! What? he did what? how much more of these implications? And what's Shar gonna say when she wakes up to see...that? I wonder. hm...ponders. shivers. wow, so okay...update soon. i'm really curious.
26Girly 411First off, caves aren't made of cement they're made of rock. teehee...you said Ryan slept on cement all night when he was in a cave of rock! Unless caves are made of cement now. hm...ponders. that's just my little nitpick. sry.
OH! that's so sad that all that was happening and they used to be so close until all that arguing and such. Oh, I hope they become close to each other soon and is Shar gonna be okay? She broke her ankle! NO! Ryan has to save her!
You're making me cry now, char. That's just so sad! luvd the sweet little flashback. it was so cute.
UH! What? he did what? how much more of these implications? And what's Shar gonna say when she wakes up to see...that? I wonder. hm...ponders. shivers. wow, so okay...update soon. i'm really curious.
1/11/2009 c4 kim-cook-319
Hey I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story and I seriously can't wait to hear the rest of it.
Keep up the good work!
Hey I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed your story and I seriously can't wait to hear the rest of it.
Keep up the good work!
1/6/2009 c3 Girly 411
mouth to mouth? hm...ponders. cute. :D Okay, Shar's wearing Ryan's clothes? Oh come on me, why is it every single time I see something like that my heart goes all fuzzy and I laugh? sighs...very sick me. Okay, so you could guess I thought that was really cute. And I can't wait to see more about that strange masked man. Kinda starting to wonder who it is...he's gonna be stuck on the island too! YAY DRAMA! And I can't wait for Shar and Ryan to meet up again. That will be fun. The only title I can think of is The Crash...but that probably isn't very creative. I'll let you know if I think of something later. Very good so far and a sorta cliffie. sighs again...okay, so I'll go read your other one now. I'm a little scared cuz the last M one I read of yours had me a little freaked even though you warned me not to read it. looks at shoes guiltily, but I said I'd read it cuz it's a really good idea and I'm gonna do that right now. Luv ya! Update soon! L8rs!
mouth to mouth? hm...ponders. cute. :D Okay, Shar's wearing Ryan's clothes? Oh come on me, why is it every single time I see something like that my heart goes all fuzzy and I laugh? sighs...very sick me. Okay, so you could guess I thought that was really cute. And I can't wait to see more about that strange masked man. Kinda starting to wonder who it is...he's gonna be stuck on the island too! YAY DRAMA! And I can't wait for Shar and Ryan to meet up again. That will be fun. The only title I can think of is The Crash...but that probably isn't very creative. I'll let you know if I think of something later. Very good so far and a sorta cliffie. sighs again...okay, so I'll go read your other one now. I'm a little scared cuz the last M one I read of yours had me a little freaked even though you warned me not to read it. looks at shoes guiltily, but I said I'd read it cuz it's a really good idea and I'm gonna do that right now. Luv ya! Update soon! L8rs!
1/6/2009 c2 Girly 411
OMG! THERE'S A TERRORIST ON THE PLANE! okay, so 9-11's really got me a little jittery. I was in third grade and didn't know why my teach was crying and this kind of reminded me of that. Okay, so um...let's see. right...ANOTHER CLIFFIE? Aw...now I'm gonna have to keep reading to find out what happens. not that I wasn't before, but now I won't be able to stop. Let me guess...there's gonna be another cliffie ending the next chappie too. sighs...well, I thought this was really suspenseful and I wonder how they'll react to the crash. smiles. I'll just find out! YAY! ready for another pretty little review? Well wait a few minutes and it will eventually come. Well, chat l8r! Luv ya!
OMG! THERE'S A TERRORIST ON THE PLANE! okay, so 9-11's really got me a little jittery. I was in third grade and didn't know why my teach was crying and this kind of reminded me of that. Okay, so um...let's see. right...ANOTHER CLIFFIE? Aw...now I'm gonna have to keep reading to find out what happens. not that I wasn't before, but now I won't be able to stop. Let me guess...there's gonna be another cliffie ending the next chappie too. sighs...well, I thought this was really suspenseful and I wonder how they'll react to the crash. smiles. I'll just find out! YAY! ready for another pretty little review? Well wait a few minutes and it will eventually come. Well, chat l8r! Luv ya!
1/6/2009 c1 Girly 411
Okay, I wasn't sure I wanted to read this, but now I think I kinda like this idea. I really do luv your ideas char! They're amazing! Luv ya and thx for letting me know about this one. Can't wait to continue. It's so exhillerating and the suspense is killing me! You'll see another one of these cute little review things in aprox. 5 minutes or so. teehee...luv ya! l8rs!
Okay, I wasn't sure I wanted to read this, but now I think I kinda like this idea. I really do luv your ideas char! They're amazing! Luv ya and thx for letting me know about this one. Can't wait to continue. It's so exhillerating and the suspense is killing me! You'll see another one of these cute little review things in aprox. 5 minutes or so. teehee...luv ya! l8rs!
1/1/2009 c2 awillowdeeplyscarred
Some of the sentences were a bit run-on but other then that it was pretty good! :) update as soon as you can
Some of the sentences were a bit run-on but other then that it was pretty good! :) update as soon as you can
12/31/2008 c2 17autumnamberleaves
aw this story is gripping my attention. Great job! I love it. You can easily tell that the twins still do care about each other even if they deny it. Despite it being about someone being sick, it was nice how Sharpay cared even though she tried to convince Ryan and even herself otherwise. Great job.
17autumnamberleavesaw this story is gripping my attention. Great job! I love it. You can easily tell that the twins still do care about each other even if they deny it. Despite it being about someone being sick, it was nice how Sharpay cared even though she tried to convince Ryan and even herself otherwise. Great job.
12/28/2008 c1 12Lackadaisical Pajamas
I really like the idea of the story and I look forward 2 reading more...but FYI your summary doesn't match up with ur story, u say shar lives with her mom instead of dad and the same thing with
ryan...I think the pairs you put it in story make more sense...look forward 2 an update
12Lackadaisical PajamasI really like the idea of the story and I look forward 2 reading more...but FYI your summary doesn't match up with ur story, u say shar lives with her mom instead of dad and the same thing with
ryan...I think the pairs you put it in story make more sense...look forward 2 an update