for Hell Don't Leave Me Hanging4/4/2009 c1 
7sprinkledwithpearls
Wow.
Just, wow.
You are really good at writing, I am not even kidding.
Why haven't you updated this? It's really good!
Very sad, yes, and depressing. But it's really good!
No spelling or grammar errors, that's awesome.
Please continue!
One thing, I am kind of confused on WHY Jasper left her and on when this takes place.
After BD?
A chapter from Jasper's POV would be helpful.
thanks.
~sprinkledwithtwilight
7sprinkledwithpearlsWow.
Just, wow.
You are really good at writing, I am not even kidding.
Why haven't you updated this? It's really good!
Very sad, yes, and depressing. But it's really good!
No spelling or grammar errors, that's awesome.
Please continue!
One thing, I am kind of confused on WHY Jasper left her and on when this takes place.
After BD?
A chapter from Jasper's POV would be helpful.
thanks.
~sprinkledwithtwilight
1/18/2009 c1 12Gixie
Hey, I loved it. It was very realistic, sad and very well written. I can't wait for more!
12GixieHey, I loved it. It was very realistic, sad and very well written. I can't wait for more!
1/1/2009 c1 2MissLoonyLovegood
So you read my story, I decided to give yours a shot and... wow. Just wow. I love it! Jasper's leaving was realistic, and Alice's breakdown was just... awesome. I think I may believe that because whenever something scary and life-threatening happens to me I break out in fits of giggles for like 20 minutes... So I can relate. XD Anyway update 'kay? Kay.
2MissLoonyLovegoodSo you read my story, I decided to give yours a shot and... wow. Just wow. I love it! Jasper's leaving was realistic, and Alice's breakdown was just... awesome. I think I may believe that because whenever something scary and life-threatening happens to me I break out in fits of giggles for like 20 minutes... So I can relate. XD Anyway update 'kay? Kay.
12/28/2008 c1 Apple Slushie
my god. i thought you loved Alice and Jasper? why do you keep torturing them ? XD
so Alice has gone completely mad. well if you do decide to update, you'll be writing from a mad womans perspective, ha that should be interesting.
And care to explain why Jasper left? and why they separated themselfs from the Cullens?
and was it because she was laughing that the neighbours, or whoever it was, came in and sent her to a mad house?
Oh yes so Alice is soo depressed or whatever she is, that it's dulled her skin... well she's not sparkly anymore. why is that?
there was something else, but i can't remember, but if i do i'll just ask you on MSN.
*Clapping hands* congradulations i found absolutly no spelling or grammar mistakes. thats a worthy achievement.
agh i stil cant remember...
my god. i thought you loved Alice and Jasper? why do you keep torturing them ? XD
so Alice has gone completely mad. well if you do decide to update, you'll be writing from a mad womans perspective, ha that should be interesting.
And care to explain why Jasper left? and why they separated themselfs from the Cullens?
and was it because she was laughing that the neighbours, or whoever it was, came in and sent her to a mad house?
Oh yes so Alice is soo depressed or whatever she is, that it's dulled her skin... well she's not sparkly anymore. why is that?
there was something else, but i can't remember, but if i do i'll just ask you on MSN.
*Clapping hands* congradulations i found absolutly no spelling or grammar mistakes. thats a worthy achievement.
agh i stil cant remember...