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6/26/2009 c1 Shadow1324
Wow... Lots of grammer errors in this, make sure you space between words, but with just a little touching up this story would be great!
2/21/2009 c1 XBreathlessWhispersX
Lol :)

This is a cute concept, I luv it :P

I like Namine and Roxas together its just so meant to be haha :)
2/2/2009 c1 9easterlily16
I think it's good as a one shot.

It's kinda funny when Cloud got knocked out by Namine. ^^
1/30/2009 c1 15SoraxKairi7
Aw, so cute. XD
1/25/2009 c1 19partner555
It's good as a one shot but for continuing it, i think about 2-5 chapters total would do.
1/22/2009 c1 Skyzerk
write more... or else(draws out oblivion)got i?
1/16/2009 c1 2NaminesFantasy
OMG I think they killed eachother XD

I think you should make a chapter about the dance! I loved this by the way ^_^
12/30/2008 c1 2vicucha
Maybe you should make just one more chapter, but the story is good so you could make it a one shot too!
12/29/2008 c1 3ForgottenInspiration
That was pretty good Mariah. You could do more of it.

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