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6/5/2012 c3 8xxPig.in.a.Pokexx
I love when the emotions of the characters can strike me to the very core. You've done a great job of this. :)
5/28/2009 c3 innocentjester
ep thats so awesome... can't wait for the next chapter X3
5/20/2009 c3 4Sarahteehee3
Oh I am excited for the next chapter! I would give u inspiration but I am fresh out. :) Please continue but as well don't make it sad and icky ( for lack of better word atm)
5/20/2009 c1 Mrs. Kururugi
I glad you decided to continue ^^
5/20/2009 c1 4watergoddesskasey
tis an awesome story! dont give up! ^-^
5/20/2009 c1 GiGi
Mika! Im reviewing! Just cause you said Nears in it yay. I actually really like your story though, surprise surprise...haha
5/20/2009 c1 WindScar
I just cant wait until the lemon, hehe
4/12/2009 c2 10Rinn Harridan
I like how you portrayed near's lonliness and his unusual relationship with mello. update soon.
4/4/2009 c2 20Inuyasha4eva
Cute. I am interested to see where this goes.
2/5/2009 c1 jest
aw i was hoping for a lemon... maybe next time.
2/5/2009 c1 jest
aw i was hoping for a lemon... maybe next time.
2/5/2009 c1 Remy
OMG! I wanna know what happenes next! UPDATE SOON!
2/5/2009 c2 10Julih
I WANNA KNOW WHAT WAS ON THE CARD TOO O/ NOT FAIR -

And was Near at least wearing underwear? lol

But Near's so cute like..being Near xD

plz, upload soon!
12/30/2008 c1 2pouf
Hehe, cute! I like your story, it's very promising. I especially enjoy the way you didn't follow a linear temporality while never confusing the reader and making your text flow. Many professional writers do this very well, but few fanfiction writers can achieve it.

Kudos to you!

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