
4/29/2021 c1 Guest
I love this soooo much. Great job. I adore Hyde and Jackie and I adore this story!
I love this soooo much. Great job. I adore Hyde and Jackie and I adore this story!
4/30/2018 c1 Guest
Loved it!
Loved it!
6/25/2017 c1 Bbc
Slob the nob
Slob the nob
1/16/2013 c1
24Gemjj
Thanks for writing this/
I love Hyde and Jackie together. they are a great couple!

Thanks for writing this/
I love Hyde and Jackie together. they are a great couple!
2/2/2009 c1 jen
such a true example of hyde and jackie takeout the"good" stuff and you'd feel like you were reading a page form the actual script
such a true example of hyde and jackie takeout the"good" stuff and you'd feel like you were reading a page form the actual script
1/28/2009 c1
57myboygeorge
this is the best kind of smut because it gets inside the heart of the characters and doesn't feel like you could replace Jackie and Hyde with any two generic personnas. bien fait!

this is the best kind of smut because it gets inside the heart of the characters and doesn't feel like you could replace Jackie and Hyde with any two generic personnas. bien fait!
1/18/2009 c1
33Willofthewisp
I adored it. A gem. It seems like so many "smut" stories sacrifice character and good writing for just the smut. Not you. From the quiet and yet suspenseful first scene with the stairs to the very end with our heroes sleeping in each other's arms, you paint a vivid picture and appeal to all the senses. And can I say nothing is hotter than Hyde reflecting on how much he loves his Jackie? That was such a touching ending. I got good and hot from how you write sex and then I melted at how you write love.

I adored it. A gem. It seems like so many "smut" stories sacrifice character and good writing for just the smut. Not you. From the quiet and yet suspenseful first scene with the stairs to the very end with our heroes sleeping in each other's arms, you paint a vivid picture and appeal to all the senses. And can I say nothing is hotter than Hyde reflecting on how much he loves his Jackie? That was such a touching ending. I got good and hot from how you write sex and then I melted at how you write love.
1/13/2009 c1 AS
Very sweet story. The affection between Jackie and Hyde is very apparent in this piece.
Lovely.
Very sweet story. The affection between Jackie and Hyde is very apparent in this piece.
Lovely.
1/13/2009 c1
24Hyde's Bride
OMG I completely loved this! It had the perfect mixture of smut and sweetness. Aww you did such a great job!

OMG I completely loved this! It had the perfect mixture of smut and sweetness. Aww you did such a great job!