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21Kelsey Goode
Oh wow great chapter. Nice competition in the chapter. I wonder who Zo will choose. She can't have both... or can she? Anywho- What's wrong with Z?
Hurry up and update so I can find out what's wrong. DON'T TELL ME LOREN GOT HER PREGNANT OR SOMETHING!
21Kelsey GoodeOh wow great chapter. Nice competition in the chapter. I wonder who Zo will choose. She can't have both... or can she? Anywho- What's wrong with Z?
Hurry up and update so I can find out what's wrong. DON'T TELL ME LOREN GOT HER PREGNANT OR SOMETHING!
1/6/2009 c5 1kaginu.inaome
ok is she pregnant with lorens baby or some thing i mean throwing up and stomach pain and looking pale it all reminds me of a pregnant woman if she isnt healthy any way great story cant wait for nect chp
1kaginu.inaomeok is she pregnant with lorens baby or some thing i mean throwing up and stomach pain and looking pale it all reminds me of a pregnant woman if she isnt healthy any way great story cant wait for nect chp
1/6/2009 c4 1jackie-chan1230
Almost like I'm reading the real house of night books! Hope you update soon!
1jackie-chan1230Almost like I'm reading the real house of night books! Hope you update soon!
1/5/2009 c2 Spirits.Dawn
OKAY, OKAY I TAKE THAT BACK, THIS SUCKS...WHAT THE FUCK DOES HE MEAN THAT HE WANTS TO MOVE ON?THAT BASTARD!...IS HE GONNA BREAK HER HEART?THAT BASTARD..(the only reason i didnt like this chappy is because that blasphemy-like thingie he said to Zoey!-I want to forgive and move on)...THAT BASTARD HE CANT LIVE WITHOUT ZOEY!
OKAY, OKAY I TAKE THAT BACK, THIS SUCKS...WHAT THE FUCK DOES HE MEAN THAT HE WANTS TO MOVE ON?THAT BASTARD!...IS HE GONNA BREAK HER HEART?THAT BASTARD..(the only reason i didnt like this chappy is because that blasphemy-like thingie he said to Zoey!-I want to forgive and move on)...THAT BASTARD HE CANT LIVE WITHOUT ZOEY!
1/5/2009 c4 27The Rockerbabe
Another great chapter! You really have all the characters down pat! ^_^ Can't wait for more! ^_^
27The RockerbabeAnother great chapter! You really have all the characters down pat! ^_^ Can't wait for more! ^_^
1/4/2009 c4 21Kelsey Goode
Oh I can't wait until the next chapter! Are you going to have competition between Erik and Stark? You should totally put that in. I'm interested to see who she would choose? I wonder if Stark will be back in Hunted...
21Kelsey GoodeOh I can't wait until the next chapter! Are you going to have competition between Erik and Stark? You should totally put that in. I'm interested to see who she would choose? I wonder if Stark will be back in Hunted...
1/4/2009 c3 Kelsey Goode
Holy Crap this is good! You have to update before I strangle myself in anticipation! jk. Update soon- I need to know what happens next! ;)
Holy Crap this is good! You have to update before I strangle myself in anticipation! jk. Update soon- I need to know what happens next! ;)
1/4/2009 c3 4IrisOfTheRainbow
That is awesome! Do you write Twilight fanfic too? Cause your name seems to suggest it. I can't wait to read more!
4IrisOfTheRainbowThat is awesome! Do you write Twilight fanfic too? Cause your name seems to suggest it. I can't wait to read more!
1/3/2009 c3 27The Rockerbabe
This is an amazing fic you have here. I like the way you picked it up after "Untamed". I really like where this is headed and can't wait to read more!
PS: You might want to add a disclaimer in one of your chapters for safety measures. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
27The RockerbabeThis is an amazing fic you have here. I like the way you picked it up after "Untamed". I really like where this is headed and can't wait to read more!
PS: You might want to add a disclaimer in one of your chapters for safety measures. ^_^ Keep up the good work!