for Uchiha Brat7/3/2018 c1 Noradin
I think it was pretty spot on except the last part.
I always suspected Itachi of sending hints to Jiraiya all the time.
I think it was pretty spot on except the last part.
I always suspected Itachi of sending hints to Jiraiya all the time.
6/17/2016 c1 palmtreehead
Sad, to think Jiraiya could have had the clues and ignored them because Orichimaru's betrayal cost him his faith in his own judgment. Thanks for sharing
Sad, to think Jiraiya could have had the clues and ignored them because Orichimaru's betrayal cost him his faith in his own judgment. Thanks for sharing
2/16/2016 c1 
3Riddle7777
Aww this is so cute! I hope you continue with it sometime. Just one more snippet!
3Riddle7777Aww this is so cute! I hope you continue with it sometime. Just one more snippet!
9/8/2010 c1 5Glass.Paradox
This was a pretty good read, esp. for something so short. Your characterization of Itachi is a little hard to believe (he doesn't seem nearly as confident as someone in his position, even as a child would be). On the other hand, Jiraiya is on the mark.
5Glass.ParadoxThis was a pretty good read, esp. for something so short. Your characterization of Itachi is a little hard to believe (he doesn't seem nearly as confident as someone in his position, even as a child would be). On the other hand, Jiraiya is on the mark.
1/13/2010 c1 5whiterae
I liked it. It's completely possible and doesn't mess with the timeline. You should write more about Jiraiya's interactions with other characters like this.
5whiteraeI liked it. It's completely possible and doesn't mess with the timeline. You should write more about Jiraiya's interactions with other characters like this.
10/11/2009 c1 6Maimaktes
Oh! Jiraiya love! *om nom nom nom nom nom*
*happy!*
Nice characterization here, methinks yo've got Jiraiya down pat. And very nice plot-bunny, I can perfectly see things happen this way.
My heart swelled at the pocky bit. That was excellent. I mean, in one sentence, you managed to turn Itachi alive.
*bows* masterly...
The Japanese nipicker in me just wants to let you know that 'Toad sEnnin' would sound better, sannin being ' the 3'.
And it's 'genjutsu'. Yes, I know, Japanese is nasty ;3
6MaimaktesOh! Jiraiya love! *om nom nom nom nom nom*
*happy!*
Nice characterization here, methinks yo've got Jiraiya down pat. And very nice plot-bunny, I can perfectly see things happen this way.
My heart swelled at the pocky bit. That was excellent. I mean, in one sentence, you managed to turn Itachi alive.
*bows* masterly...
The Japanese nipicker in me just wants to let you know that 'Toad sEnnin' would sound better, sannin being ' the 3'.
And it's 'genjutsu'. Yes, I know, Japanese is nasty ;3
9/21/2009 c1 2kaear
Interesting. Will there ever be a sequel? I wonder what their thoughts were as they died. Did they feel they failed each other? Thank you for sharing.
2kaearInteresting. Will there ever be a sequel? I wonder what their thoughts were as they died. Did they feel they failed each other? Thank you for sharing.
9/13/2009 c1 Greysh
Nice oneshot :) You wrote that 'connection' between the uchiha brat and Jiraiya very well. I liked little Itashi :)
Nice oneshot :) You wrote that 'connection' between the uchiha brat and Jiraiya very well. I liked little Itashi :)
4/1/2009 c1 3sciencekills
I really like how you wrote this! It feels like this could have even happened in the actual anime!
3sciencekillsI really like how you wrote this! It feels like this could have even happened in the actual anime!
1/23/2009 c1 41lovesrainscent
Oh wow - great job of insight into both their characters through a few brief meetings. Loved Jiraiya's explanations of his priorities as to who he would protect and why.
41lovesrainscentOh wow - great job of insight into both their characters through a few brief meetings. Loved Jiraiya's explanations of his priorities as to who he would protect and why.