for The Master of Death8/9/2016 c1 Ms.I-could-care-less
Hi! I think that 'Qui est vous' is a bit wrong. I think it might be 'qui êtes-vous' or something. But I love this so far! Great job!
Hi! I think that 'Qui est vous' is a bit wrong. I think it might be 'qui êtes-vous' or something. But I love this so far! Great job!
12/5/2013 c2 B
Love this Harry. Update soon
Love this Harry. Update soon
12/10/2012 c2 
2Kari-is-happy
I am enjoying this very much, if this review makes no sebse it is because my phone isnt ketting mes ee what i am writing. Anyway this is obe of the bettwr harry is master if death i have read, lookibg forward o get to read more
2Kari-is-happyI am enjoying this very much, if this review makes no sebse it is because my phone isnt ketting mes ee what i am writing. Anyway this is obe of the bettwr harry is master if death i have read, lookibg forward o get to read more
10/9/2012 c1 3frytrix
Honestly,,, the first chapter sucked...
Way to rushed and tells us nothing about harry, it sems like you just wanted him to rush straigh into combat,,, no fokus on his personality at all.
3frytrixHonestly,,, the first chapter sucked...
Way to rushed and tells us nothing about harry, it sems like you just wanted him to rush straigh into combat,,, no fokus on his personality at all.
2/22/2012 c2 harry potter fan 1000000000000
duyde this chapter was totaly bombing, butn ext you should have harry talk to nevill and have him somehow bring nevil's parrents' sanity back
duyde this chapter was totaly bombing, butn ext you should have harry talk to nevill and have him somehow bring nevil's parrents' sanity back
11/27/2011 c2 13Unseen Watcher
Ignore the whiners. Very fun. I love what you've done with Hedwig. I see you're staying away from going 'Mr. Black'. heh. I can respect that. Still hope he travels for fun ... and picks up languages in the large amount of time he has before him. I'm glad he's not alone. Here's to him. And thanks to you. ^_^
13Unseen WatcherIgnore the whiners. Very fun. I love what you've done with Hedwig. I see you're staying away from going 'Mr. Black'. heh. I can respect that. Still hope he travels for fun ... and picks up languages in the large amount of time he has before him. I'm glad he's not alone. Here's to him. And thanks to you. ^_^
11/27/2011 c1 Unseen Watcher
Nice intro, Harry. Heh. Here's to a long career of wandering around, getting into trouble, building a fortune Midas would envy, and becoming a legend no one dares challenge.
Nice intro, Harry. Heh. Here's to a long career of wandering around, getting into trouble, building a fortune Midas would envy, and becoming a legend no one dares challenge.