4/5/2009 c1 2ILoveMormonBoys
I think you did a really good job with that! :)

1/1/2009 c1 YayItsUjala
this is really good i can feel the pain just like in new moon i wnat to know what happns net but you should make the chapter little longer because he over thinks everything and are there going to be any ore chapters for this story?