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3/4/2009 c2 14typerventilating
Sorry I didn't review before, but I had the flu and sadly I still do. Anyways, I like it so far and I'm curious to see where you plan on going. Glad you changed it to all the correct info and I hope to see longer chapters.

Sorry I couldn't give much, but there wasn't much to advise on. Not yet.

Update soon!
2/25/2009 c2 22TheyreLooking4MyHeart
Nice, I like what you added!
1/4/2009 c1 14typerventilating
I'm interested to see where you take this, but I want you to know that Durmstrang is an all boys school. Your character had to of either go to a made up school or Beauxbatons an all girl school. So you might want to change that.

Sorry I had to point that out.
1/2/2009 c1 22TheyreLooking4MyHeart
do we get a sex scene? LOL J/K You know im so organized chaos LOLOLOL Waiting for whats coming next girl!

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