
6/18/2009 c1
16Fangirl66
I love Tsuoka bonding! They are too cute
Loved the adorable fic-lit! XD
Cheers,
Fangirl66

I love Tsuoka bonding! They are too cute
Loved the adorable fic-lit! XD
Cheers,
Fangirl66
1/6/2009 c1 wlk68
This was very sweet.
This was very sweet.
1/5/2009 c1 AnimeAngelRin
I like the way you write, but I had just a few things to comment on. I could be wrong, but I think the timeline may be off by just a tad. about one year after they became partners, they were somewhere in volume 4, and I believe it was another year before Kyoto. my only other comment: isn't several hundred yards way too far for Tsuzuki to see Hisoka? XD for anyone to see anyone, for that matter? lol that's all I wanted to say =P I hope you write more TsuSoka!
~Rin
I like the way you write, but I had just a few things to comment on. I could be wrong, but I think the timeline may be off by just a tad. about one year after they became partners, they were somewhere in volume 4, and I believe it was another year before Kyoto. my only other comment: isn't several hundred yards way too far for Tsuzuki to see Hisoka? XD for anyone to see anyone, for that matter? lol that's all I wanted to say =P I hope you write more TsuSoka!
~Rin