for Dreamland1/23/2009 c1 
3Draco's water melon LoL
i like the summary and this introduction part or what ever it is. it seems interesting and it may develop into a nice story :) i think you should keep writing ...
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3Draco's water melon LoLi like the summary and this introduction part or what ever it is. it seems interesting and it may develop into a nice story :) i think you should keep writing ...
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1/19/2009 c1 kelly
um nice i guess but shouldnt you write a little more? the description sounds good tho so keep writing...
-kelly
um nice i guess but shouldnt you write a little more? the description sounds good tho so keep writing...
-kelly