1/4/2009 c1 7smellyia
OH...YOU DID WELL WITH EDWARD'S POV!

I am so intrigued, even though, well you know.

I did love getting this characterization of Bella. She seems so normal and yet, not overly plain or overly done. She is a girl I can identify with.

And this Edward...lady, you already got me falling for him...ravenously hungry. I bet buddy.

Well Done!

1/4/2009 c1 jimemon
Great first time, I am very intrigued about this :)

1/4/2009 c1 5AngstGoddess003
I'm so psyched about this fic!

"I Googled my boss."

UGH! This had me laughing so hard. Because it is utterly true. And you did the background with Bella and The Cullens sans Edward perfectly. It was a believable deviation from canon. I also liked Bella's supporting character, Angela. Glad you kept her in, because the friendship really humanizes Bella quite well.

Oh, and the Pacific Northwest Trust idea was, of course, brilliant. It's so Edward, supporting the arts and stuff, philanthropy. Great idea, and you're already building his character rather nicely before we even meet him. I dig that.

"Furthermore, you will be asked to sign a confidentiality agreement before you start, which is completely standard for a personal assistant."

Umm... I'm not sure why, but I liked this detail because it was just so... realistic. If I had a dime for every "Confidentiality Agreement" and "Non-Compete" clause, I'd be rich. Kudos on doing your research, and for making Edward as private as one would expect from a vampire.

I like that Edward had previously encouraged the PA to listen to music. It seems sweet, and canon, even though I know he's going to be a little OOC.

Private Rooms? Um... yes? YES. I am dying to enter the private rooms already.

God, I loved the closet, dude. The rows and the hangers and the compulsive hoarding. It screamed OCDward. That's a good thing. No. An awesome thing. Definitely.

"From what I could gather I had apparently just agreed to work for the next year for a reclusive, obsessive compulsive, vintage clothes wearing and special diet eating, boss."

Yeah. You lucky son-of-a-gun. Go make that man all dirty!

"I liked it, but well, it made me kind of hungry."

Nice description of what Bella's scent does to Edward. The flowers. Freesias or whatever. Then it made him so hungry he had to hunt.

You weaved the pasts perfectly to set this all up.

I sigh. I'm anxiously awaiting more. I've heard too much to not be intrigued.

UPDATE SON!

-AG

1/4/2009 c1 kellilly
Edwards a man whore with a devient sexual appetite? he pays for hookers? looking forward to maybe a little Slutward!

1/4/2009 c1 NoneSoAgile
How intriguing! I like the start of this story and it is very well written. I can't wait until Edward and Bella meet. That should be interesting...

1/4/2009 c1 pippapear
Angel..

This is incredible!

Bloody love it.

And am already desp for more. BUt don't worry I will have the patience of a saint... Scouts honour.

I am guessing he is a vamp?

This is all so intriguing. I cannot wait to see their interactions. Her scent is going to slay him when he gets it full force...

Brill.

THANKS!

(& HAPPY NEW YEAR!)

X

1/4/2009 c1 ny88
Havent heard of a story like this. Please continue I already like the plot :D

1/4/2009 c1 3hotandcold
I am so psyched for this fic!

I love how the scent makes Edward hungry. Can't wait for more!