8/11/2014 c5 brenda.warren.1257
let me guess James, Victoria and he trying to stop them from killing in this town
let me guess James, Victoria and he trying to stop them from killing in this town
8/11/2014 c3 brenda.warren.1257
well now he knows he cant read her mind and that she don't wear perfume that its her real smell what is he going to do now
well now he knows he cant read her mind and that she don't wear perfume that its her real smell what is he going to do now
8/11/2014 c2 brenda.warren.1257
it looks like as smart as he is it would be it isn't perfume but her sent that's making him hungry dumb isn't he to be so smart.
it looks like as smart as he is it would be it isn't perfume but her sent that's making him hungry dumb isn't he to be so smart.
8/11/2014 c1 brenda.warren.1257
I think he is already liking her smell but will he like her or want to kill her guess we will see wont we
I think he is already liking her smell but will he like her or want to kill her guess we will see wont we
7/20/2014 c33 12Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen
This story was one of the few I believe are sophisticated. Very we'll written and the plot was classy. It felt very realistic. Although obviously vampires and such arn't real, if they were, things would go down like this. You did an excellent job on this story. Your Edward and Bella were both very endearing characters.
This story was one of the few I believe are sophisticated. Very we'll written and the plot was classy. It felt very realistic. Although obviously vampires and such arn't real, if they were, things would go down like this. You did an excellent job on this story. Your Edward and Bella were both very endearing characters.
7/15/2014 c20 Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen
What have you done to me... I'm posting AGAIN before the end... But I just really wanted to compliment you
"Your heartbeat has become my compass. At first though, it taunted and provoked me. It betrayed you. But now, I'm at a loss when I can't find it."
If I hadn't literally read twilight a hundred times, you could have told me that line came from the actual book. Seriously... I'm very impressed with you as an author. Just wow.
Ps. Dare I say it... But you may have wrote twilight... Better than SM. Although you have a different setting, it STILL is twilight. Their personalities, and dreams and hopes and struggles... It's like you developed these characters to a ten when SM did it to (amazing still) but to an 8. It is still them... But better. Applause!
What have you done to me... I'm posting AGAIN before the end... But I just really wanted to compliment you
"Your heartbeat has become my compass. At first though, it taunted and provoked me. It betrayed you. But now, I'm at a loss when I can't find it."
If I hadn't literally read twilight a hundred times, you could have told me that line came from the actual book. Seriously... I'm very impressed with you as an author. Just wow.
Ps. Dare I say it... But you may have wrote twilight... Better than SM. Although you have a different setting, it STILL is twilight. Their personalities, and dreams and hopes and struggles... It's like you developed these characters to a ten when SM did it to (amazing still) but to an 8. It is still them... But better. Applause!
7/15/2014 c10 Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen
I don't really often post in the middle of stories, but I HAVE TO tell you how incredibly amazing it was that Bella thinks he is gay! I mean, seriously great humor on your part and it ACTUALLY fits the story, so congrats on some good quality fun writing!
I don't really often post in the middle of stories, but I HAVE TO tell you how incredibly amazing it was that Bella thinks he is gay! I mean, seriously great humor on your part and it ACTUALLY fits the story, so congrats on some good quality fun writing!
6/6/2014 c33 Guest
First of all, thank you for writing this story. To anyone reading this review, this story is absolutley amazing (and completed!) And I highly recommend it. You're writing and characterisation is fabulous :)
First of all, thank you for writing this story. To anyone reading this review, this story is absolutley amazing (and completed!) And I highly recommend it. You're writing and characterisation is fabulous :)
5/3/2014 c33 Ellencu
Thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed the humor, the interactions of the characters, the always quirky Edward and Bella - my favorite ultimate romantic couple of today's literature!
Thank you for writing this story. I really enjoyed the humor, the interactions of the characters, the always quirky Edward and Bella - my favorite ultimate romantic couple of today's literature!
5/2/2014 c5 Crazyforcullen104
Came apon this story a while ago an have had it on my reading confused so far but hooked lol
Came apon this story a while ago an have had it on my reading confused so far but hooked lol