for Red1/24/2021 c4 Guest
This is amazing! Please update soon!
This is amazing! Please update soon!
4/15/2019 c4 feirywolf113
what u r doing is not editing its quiting this story is good continue
what u r doing is not editing its quiting this story is good continue
2/1/2019 c4 Guest
i really liked it.
i just wished you completed it
the plot and your writing style is great
i really liked it.
i just wished you completed it
the plot and your writing style is great
6/11/2018 c1 Tan R
Can I just say...those long ass reviews left by guest... are awesome! Exactly what I'm thinking... except the tanwhore part lol
Can I just say...those long ass reviews left by guest... are awesome! Exactly what I'm thinking... except the tanwhore part lol
5/21/2018 c4 Guest
Why are you asking people what they think about "new" Edward? He quiet and nice ONE FUCKING DAY and you think that this is the "new" him and that we should all be impressed?
Hes a fucking whore! AND hes mean to bella all the time. Hell, I don't fucking like him at all!
Why are you asking people what they think about "new" Edward? He quiet and nice ONE FUCKING DAY and you think that this is the "new" him and that we should all be impressed?
Hes a fucking whore! AND hes mean to bella all the time. Hell, I don't fucking like him at all!
5/21/2018 c2 Guest
I cant picture how their office is set up. Why would bella have to walk through Edwards to get to hers?
If Edward loves bella then why is he always fucking different women in his office where bella will see?
I don't like how her attraction is only thinly failed by anger...I don't feel like she should like him AT ALL.
So Tanwhore is Edward "friend"? Does he fuck all his friends? In front of the girl he loves?
I cant picture how their office is set up. Why would bella have to walk through Edwards to get to hers?
If Edward loves bella then why is he always fucking different women in his office where bella will see?
I don't like how her attraction is only thinly failed by anger...I don't feel like she should like him AT ALL.
So Tanwhore is Edward "friend"? Does he fuck all his friends? In front of the girl he loves?
5/21/2018 c1 Guest
He sounds like a nasty whore. He was JUST in his office getting it on with someone, bella caught him and right after he has the fucking nerve to hit on her? What a pig.
He sounds like a nasty whore. He was JUST in his office getting it on with someone, bella caught him and right after he has the fucking nerve to hit on her? What a pig.
3/27/2018 c4 Hershey
This is amazing! I really hope you can continue the story.
This is amazing! I really hope you can continue the story.
3/28/2017 c4 Guest
So far I love the story. I couldn't put it down! It is so so addictive. Anyhoo I would love some more fluff in there but just a bit between Edward and bell
So far I love the story. I couldn't put it down! It is so so addictive. Anyhoo I would love some more fluff in there but just a bit between Edward and bell
3/20/2016 c4 A TWILIGHT FAN
I LOVE THIS STORY!️️️️️️️️️️️️️️
I LOVE THIS STORY!️️️️️️️️️️️️️️
1/29/2016 c4 
9printmaker
So, I knew even before I started reading this that it was a bad idea. It's been years since you updated, bit im kinda hoping at some point you'll finish posting it anyway.
I think it's a fantastic story, and it's refreshing after what feels like having read the same fic over and over again.
9printmakerSo, I knew even before I started reading this that it was a bad idea. It's been years since you updated, bit im kinda hoping at some point you'll finish posting it anyway.
I think it's a fantastic story, and it's refreshing after what feels like having read the same fic over and over again.
5/3/2015 c4 girllgemini
Hey :)
Thisstory is amazing. I love how you have characterized Bella and Edward. It's beena while, or simply 3 years, that you've posted. I was wondering if, by any means, you'd complete this story. It's pretty much engaging :))
Hey :)
Thisstory is amazing. I love how you have characterized Bella and Edward. It's beena while, or simply 3 years, that you've posted. I was wondering if, by any means, you'd complete this story. It's pretty much engaging :))
3/28/2015 c4 Daphne
Hey doesn't matter how an office really works or any of that u(guest) mentioned.. Boy its jst a fic and evn if Edward's personality sounds creepy n stalker kind.. Well that's what sounds intriguing! Eager to know hw da story n characters develop and plz do UPDATE ASAP! u could jst ignore the negative remarks n continue please? I would if i wer you!
Hey doesn't matter how an office really works or any of that u(guest) mentioned.. Boy its jst a fic and evn if Edward's personality sounds creepy n stalker kind.. Well that's what sounds intriguing! Eager to know hw da story n characters develop and plz do UPDATE ASAP! u could jst ignore the negative remarks n continue please? I would if i wer you!
3/27/2015 c4 Daphne
Hi! Idk y u would jst stop with just 4 chapters! Could u plz take it forward? I really really want to know more about this, its pretty interesting..
Hi! Idk y u would jst stop with just 4 chapters! Could u plz take it forward? I really really want to know more about this, its pretty interesting..