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5/24/2015 c2 Guest
Is Macky Taylor supposed to be Mac?
6/7/2009 c2 4eurogirl14
plot line sounds good, but please, and im not trying to be insulting, but please get a beta reader. some of the things youve written dont really make sense, and the way youve broken the chapter into paragraphs. thank you and let me know if you get around to fixing it.
2/19/2009 c1 4Timberwolf Operators
nice intro and beginning for the story, i will enjoy reading this story.

please re read my story i change some things in the second chapt i will have a 3 chapt soon
2/19/2009 c10 Timberwolf Operators
is this the new story you was telling me about that is AFF on ?

if not help me get to the story so i could read it.

ill have to go back to the begining on this story, i just found this one. Smile he he ^^
1/4/2009 c2 2joy1791
Yay, I get to give you a review this time. This seems really interesting. I hope nothing happens to Heather.

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