for I'll Wait9/21/2002 c1 Kayla dont wanna login
hmm..i like this one a lot!but,Trunks is mine and i aint about to loose him to a newborn baby!oh,well..it's your story,not mine!oh,one more thing... *takes a deep breath*UPDATE!
hmm..i like this one a lot!but,Trunks is mine and i aint about to loose him to a newborn baby!oh,well..it's your story,not mine!oh,one more thing... *takes a deep breath*UPDATE!
6/5/2002 c1 KutiePan16
Cool but in the end a little creepy. Bye.
Cool but in the end a little creepy. Bye.
3/6/2002 c1 Kiyoko
...OMG! That can't be it...can it?...NO! Your gonna finsh this story WOMAN! FINISH IT! RIGHT NOW! NOT NOW...BUT RIGHT NOW! ^^...it's just such a wonderful story...even though Trunks is mine...and Pan doesn't deserve him...but this was a very...interesting story! NOW CONTINUE! ^.~
...OMG! That can't be it...can it?...NO! Your gonna finsh this story WOMAN! FINISH IT! RIGHT NOW! NOT NOW...BUT RIGHT NOW! ^^...it's just such a wonderful story...even though Trunks is mine...and Pan doesn't deserve him...but this was a very...interesting story! NOW CONTINUE! ^.~
2/26/2002 c1 
3Twilight Dragonfly
*sobs* So romantic! You should write a follow up story about when Pan is 21, and beautiful and Trunks tells her about his "little"(talk about MONUMENTAL)promise. THAT would be OUTSTANDING! Oh HUGGLES for this story! ^.~v
3Twilight Dragonfly*sobs* So romantic! You should write a follow up story about when Pan is 21, and beautiful and Trunks tells her about his "little"(talk about MONUMENTAL)promise. THAT would be OUTSTANDING! Oh HUGGLES for this story! ^.~v
12/1/2001 c1 Brandon B. not signed in
Pretty spiffy. U're gonna continue?
Pretty spiffy. U're gonna continue?
11/30/2001 c1 i like food
awwwwwwwww! thats so cute! and so is trunks i love trunks ::sigh:: any way back to your story...
as my drama class would say "it was good i liked it" but you need to addmore ch to this story becuz i can see it going some where!
awwwwwwwww! thats so cute! and so is trunks i love trunks ::sigh:: any way back to your story...
as my drama class would say "it was good i liked it" but you need to addmore ch to this story becuz i can see it going some where!
11/30/2001 c1 Lady Diamond1
Not a bad start. i wait to see what comes of this story. Keep it up. SRSS
Not a bad start. i wait to see what comes of this story. Keep it up. SRSS
11/30/2001 c1 Shin Vejita
...Trunks is a cradle robber, hehe, but this story has hooked me so far, cant wait till theres more, but i suppose i'll have to wait, oh well, hmm, keep up the good work...
...Trunks is a cradle robber, hehe, but this story has hooked me so far, cant wait till theres more, but i suppose i'll have to wait, oh well, hmm, keep up the good work...
11/30/2001 c1 Candy
I'm gonna tell you something I have told every other writer I reviewed...
...UPDATE!
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I'm gonna tell you something I have told every other writer I reviewed...
...UPDATE!
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11/30/2001 c1 Pan
awwwwwwwwwwwww! ilove it last a Pan fic...no Bra!I love it cute. You should write more like this.
awwwwwwwwwwwww! ilove it last a Pan fic...no Bra!I love it cute. You should write more like this.