
1/2/2014 c29 CurlyFries01
I would most definitely read a sequel! Please write one, even just a one-shot!
Loved it!
I would most definitely read a sequel! Please write one, even just a one-shot!
Loved it!
1/1/2014 c5 CurlyFries01
In the first line of the second paragraph, you wrote flooing to Diagon Alley, stepping out of the fireplace of The Three Broomsticks... I think you meant the Leaky Cauldron, cause the three broomsticks is in Hogsmeade, not Diagon Alley. :) Good work otherwise! Keep it up! :)
In the first line of the second paragraph, you wrote flooing to Diagon Alley, stepping out of the fireplace of The Three Broomsticks... I think you meant the Leaky Cauldron, cause the three broomsticks is in Hogsmeade, not Diagon Alley. :) Good work otherwise! Keep it up! :)
11/6/2013 c16 Noble Korhedron
Eh, so what? I'd have done it another way - made Argus cut the wand in half with a sword. It looks cool and does the same thing...
Eh, so what? I'd have done it another way - made Argus cut the wand in half with a sword. It looks cool and does the same thing...
11/6/2013 c10 Noble Korhedron
WOAH! SERIOUSLY different Narcissa! Are you definitely pairing her with Snape, or will Sirius reinstate her? Or what'll you do?
WOAH! SERIOUSLY different Narcissa! Are you definitely pairing her with Snape, or will Sirius reinstate her? Or what'll you do?
11/6/2013 c9 Noble Korhedron
Ehh, maybe Tasha... Can't be the flippin' healer, you gave her a Muggle husband...
Ehh, maybe Tasha... Can't be the flippin' healer, you gave her a Muggle husband...
11/6/2013 c5 Noble Korhedron
OUCH! Poor them - and that stupid shopkeeper! Poor him 'cause I wouldn't want Severus Snape angry at me!
OUCH! Poor them - and that stupid shopkeeper! Poor him 'cause I wouldn't want Severus Snape angry at me!
11/3/2013 c8 HermioneSnapeLestrange
After reading this chapter,i'm quite confused that Holly in this Chapter According to Snape she doesn't know about Narcissa and Draco as her Half Brother,but in another Chapter a while back she does know about him as Snape told her about him.
After reading this chapter,i'm quite confused that Holly in this Chapter According to Snape she doesn't know about Narcissa and Draco as her Half Brother,but in another Chapter a while back she does know about him as Snape told her about him.
8/31/2013 c16 Child of Dreams
Um, why did Dumbledore call Shelby 'Nameless One'?
And what does 'Get thee hence' mean?
Um, why did Dumbledore call Shelby 'Nameless One'?
And what does 'Get thee hence' mean?