for Colors10/13/2009 c13 soneat
You're a good writer, and this was an interesting use of color. Color as a prompt? Oh my, yes! I think it's a wonderful way to warm-up to writing short stories. I think I might borrow this little idea of yours (giving credit where it's due).
You're a good writer, and this was an interesting use of color. Color as a prompt? Oh my, yes! I think it's a wonderful way to warm-up to writing short stories. I think I might borrow this little idea of yours (giving credit where it's due).
10/7/2009 c13 
1tilly-tally-tease
I liked it a lot. Thanks for writing this story :D I enjoyed working through the color meanings and everything and getting to know your specific characters.
1tilly-tally-teaseI liked it a lot. Thanks for writing this story :D I enjoyed working through the color meanings and everything and getting to know your specific characters.
10/7/2009 c12 tilly-tally-tease
I have to admit I was a little confused by this. And who was the professor they saw? You totally lost me, but got the mysterious factor down. Which of course I liked the mysterious, but it may have been more than was needed, since I couldn't tell what was going on. But I did indeed like it, it just confused me.
I have to admit I was a little confused by this. And who was the professor they saw? You totally lost me, but got the mysterious factor down. Which of course I liked the mysterious, but it may have been more than was needed, since I couldn't tell what was going on. But I did indeed like it, it just confused me.
10/5/2009 c12 soneat
Sorry I've been so late in reviewing. But this was a good story. It's a great idea for a writing excercise. Perhaps one day you'll continue some of these. Particularly the gray one.
Sorry I've been so late in reviewing. But this was a good story. It's a great idea for a writing excercise. Perhaps one day you'll continue some of these. Particularly the gray one.
9/21/2009 c10 3Quirrelmort
I just love how even though it's a different personality for each chapter, it's still Harry. I can always, throughout the story, picture it as Harry. good job. =]
3QuirrelmortI just love how even though it's a different personality for each chapter, it's still Harry. I can always, throughout the story, picture it as Harry. good job. =]
9/14/2009 c8 im to lazy to log in
i really like them and i so want you to type morew please!
i really like them and i so want you to type morew please!
9/10/2009 c1 Melora
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
9/10/2009 c8 1tilly-tally-tease
I like these. Some of them are fun to just read and then go back to the colors and then read your description for the color. Then, I try to find the parts of the story that you meant to match with each part of the color explanation. I especially like this one, as it got the description of your color almost exactly
1tilly-tally-teaseI like these. Some of them are fun to just read and then go back to the colors and then read your description for the color. Then, I try to find the parts of the story that you meant to match with each part of the color explanation. I especially like this one, as it got the description of your color almost exactly