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1/14/2009 c1 41e-pony
Well, Jeannie, your dialogue is definitely getting better, as is your general story structure. But what I really like here is the judge's apology, understated and in character.

Pony
1/12/2009 c1 10302pilot
Hi Jeanne-You've been really busy! I can see how much you love these characters. Thanks for adding to the collection of stories!

Ceebee

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