for Isle Esme: The Lost Chapters4/14/2011 c5 Rima2000
Wonderful...fun, sexy, playful and passionate! This is just what was missing in the book...you filled in the blanks perfectly...Thank you and I am sure Edward and Bella want to thank you too...grin.
Wonderful...fun, sexy, playful and passionate! This is just what was missing in the book...you filled in the blanks perfectly...Thank you and I am sure Edward and Bella want to thank you too...grin.
4/14/2011 c4 Rima2000
Great Chapter...I am definitely all hot and bothered now...
One suggestion in your text though...
this sentence:
He removed her ankles from his shoulders, wrapped her legs around her waist and entered her in one swift movement.
I think you meant to say ...wrapped her legs around "his" waist...
Because if she can wrap her legs around her waist...she is exceptionally bendable and probably not human...grin.
Great Chapter...I am definitely all hot and bothered now...
One suggestion in your text though...
this sentence:
He removed her ankles from his shoulders, wrapped her legs around her waist and entered her in one swift movement.
I think you meant to say ...wrapped her legs around "his" waist...
Because if she can wrap her legs around her waist...she is exceptionally bendable and probably not human...grin.
3/31/2011 c5 colrey
I guess I picked a good story to read with all the leaked BD pictures out today, especially the headboard one. lol
I guess I picked a good story to read with all the leaked BD pictures out today, especially the headboard one. lol
3/19/2011 c5 You'reMyAlibi
I loved the "lost" chapters and love how you kept Edward and Bella true to their characters:)
I loved the "lost" chapters and love how you kept Edward and Bella true to their characters:)
3/12/2011 c5 
4Willowby
Again, a great take on this very popular subject. Having read several, I can easily say yours is the best. (And I even wrote one myself!)
4WillowbyAgain, a great take on this very popular subject. Having read several, I can easily say yours is the best. (And I even wrote one myself!)
2/15/2011 c5 babygirl
moreeeee!
moreeeee!
1/22/2011 c5 DeeDee630
mmmm...I love reading of the honeymoon...thanks for filling in the fade to blank moments.
mmmm...I love reading of the honeymoon...thanks for filling in the fade to blank moments.
1/8/2011 c1 1853kaz
I often wonder about the blank hole.. wondering how far they'd get in their initial exploration of each other. Thanks for having a go at filling it in - I was comfortable with it! Coulda happened, right? Cheers. :)
I often wonder about the blank hole.. wondering how far they'd get in their initial exploration of each other. Thanks for having a go at filling it in - I was comfortable with it! Coulda happened, right? Cheers. :)
1/8/2011 c5 Annie Lantus
I loved the "lost" chapters! They were very Edward-characteristic and believable! :)
I loved the "lost" chapters! They were very Edward-characteristic and believable! :)