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7/20/2011 c2 Dulcinea21bella
Way to take charge, Bella!
7/20/2011 c1 Dulcinea21bella
This is sensual and erotic!
7/3/2011 c1 2Peacelover56
amazing
4/19/2011 c5 Eric's No 1 lover
Absolutely delicious!
4/14/2011 c5 Rima2000
Wonderful...fun, sexy, playful and passionate! This is just what was missing in the book...you filled in the blanks perfectly...Thank you and I am sure Edward and Bella want to thank you too...grin.
4/14/2011 c4 Rima2000
Great Chapter...I am definitely all hot and bothered now...

One suggestion in your text though...

this sentence:

He removed her ankles from his shoulders, wrapped her legs around her waist and entered her in one swift movement.

I think you meant to say ...wrapped her legs around "his" waist...

Because if she can wrap her legs around her waist...she is exceptionally bendable and probably not human...grin.
3/31/2011 c5 colrey
I guess I picked a good story to read with all the leaked BD pictures out today, especially the headboard one. lol
3/19/2011 c5 You'reMyAlibi
I loved the "lost" chapters and love how you kept Edward and Bella true to their characters:)
3/12/2011 c5 4Willowby
Again, a great take on this very popular subject. Having read several, I can easily say yours is the best. (And I even wrote one myself!)
2/25/2011 c5 burningbronze
Hot! NSFW... except in the bathroom.. :)
2/15/2011 c5 babygirl
moreeeee!
1/22/2011 c5 DeeDee630
mmmm...I love reading of the honeymoon...thanks for filling in the fade to blank moments.
1/22/2011 c2 DeeDee630
just discoverd these 'lost chapters' of the honeymoon...so glad I did
1/8/2011 c1 1853kaz
I often wonder about the blank hole.. wondering how far they'd get in their initial exploration of each other. Thanks for having a go at filling it in - I was comfortable with it! Coulda happened, right? Cheers. :)
1/8/2011 c5 Annie Lantus
I loved the "lost" chapters! They were very Edward-characteristic and believable! :)
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