for Isle Esme: The Lost Chapters
144/10/2010 c1 sa5m dilema
it is tottally sexy but i want 2 hear sex more
it is tottally sexy but i want 2 hear sex more
4/10/2010 c1 heather
omg! you did an awsome job with this... other authors say there story fits right into the book but yours truly did! its just enough detail, but still tasteful. they are infact inlove and it IS their wdding night so its completely moral and i felt the love and passion as i read...omg. I also love how u had edward "take his time" making her "ready" lol... great job. a+
omg! you did an awsome job with this... other authors say there story fits right into the book but yours truly did! its just enough detail, but still tasteful. they are infact inlove and it IS their wdding night so its completely moral and i felt the love and passion as i read...omg. I also love how u had edward "take his time" making her "ready" lol... great job. a+
4/3/2010 c1 LinglingRose
This is so what is missing in Breaking Dawn. I always kind of imaged how things went down in the ocean and the night. So glad you wrote about it. So grateful. I am reading on. Just what we needed! Perfect!
This is so what is missing in Breaking Dawn. I always kind of imaged how things went down in the ocean and the night. So glad you wrote about it. So grateful. I am reading on. Just what we needed! Perfect!
3/14/2010 c6 buffbronze
Probably my most fave "Isle Esme missing scenes" fic out there...really well done!
Probably my most fave "Isle Esme missing scenes" fic out there...really well done!
3/14/2010 c5 buffbronze
I love, oh how I love you"
After a few moments he took her in his arms and started to kiss her face gently. Edward looked into her eyes and said,
"That's why we're here"
seriously...*sigh*...love this so much
I love, oh how I love you"
After a few moments he took her in his arms and started to kiss her face gently. Edward looked into her eyes and said,
"That's why we're here"
seriously...*sigh*...love this so much
1/22/2010 c2 LizzyAtTheLake
m..love this. i like htat they are taking their building up to what virginward can handle. It helps to us realize how much control intimacy truly requires from him, it feels excrutiatingly wonderful
m..love this. i like htat they are taking their building up to what virginward can handle. It helps to us realize how much control intimacy truly requires from him, it feels excrutiatingly wonderful
1/21/2010 c1 LizzyAtTheLake
i think this is hot...the original leaves us wanting for more...so much more detail
i think this is hot...the original leaves us wanting for more...so much more detail