for United and Unleashed4/27/2010 c7 
1humaneamy
I read all seven chapter and I got to say this is really good. Can't wait for the next chapter. : )
1humaneamyI read all seven chapter and I got to say this is really good. Can't wait for the next chapter. : )
4/27/2009 c5 1teamfred
hey this is realy good actually i like it but umm so harry will he ever meet his parents? hope so.
1teamfredhey this is realy good actually i like it but umm so harry will he ever meet his parents? hope so.
3/4/2009 c4 1aishwarya karunanidhi
hello..
love ur story till now.. i love stories where harry has super powers and i also like stories abt james and lily.. but i've not yet read stories where harry has the opportunity to grow up with his parents..plz dont make harry bad.. neutral is ok.. does harry return to his parents.. i hope so..learning to use his powers is important but so is to be loved by his parents..
plz give a flash back as to what exactly happened the night harry was taken away by voldemort.. does the prophecy exist..
if u do hv someone who is doing the beta reading, then they hv done a great job. if it all by urself, wow!
keep writing.. may u get many more reviews..
ash
1aishwarya karunanidhihello..
love ur story till now.. i love stories where harry has super powers and i also like stories abt james and lily.. but i've not yet read stories where harry has the opportunity to grow up with his parents..plz dont make harry bad.. neutral is ok.. does harry return to his parents.. i hope so..learning to use his powers is important but so is to be loved by his parents..
plz give a flash back as to what exactly happened the night harry was taken away by voldemort.. does the prophecy exist..
if u do hv someone who is doing the beta reading, then they hv done a great job. if it all by urself, wow!
keep writing.. may u get many more reviews..
ash