for The visitor3/17/2009 c3 
4melanintypist67
You have to update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. I want to know if Bella lost her job or not, and if her nightmare is really going to come true. You have to update extremely soon. PLEASE!
4melanintypist67You have to update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. I want to know if Bella lost her job or not, and if her nightmare is really going to come true. You have to update extremely soon. PLEASE!
1/31/2009 c3 1Hittanasa
I loved this chapter, I can't wait for more!
Just watch some of your speelings and it would be perfect.
Keep writing!
1HittanasaI loved this chapter, I can't wait for more!
Just watch some of your speelings and it would be perfect.
Keep writing!
1/30/2009 c3 FeistyPalooka
Really good story so far. Loved Training Day, that was hilarious. Can't wait to read more!
Really good story so far. Loved Training Day, that was hilarious. Can't wait to read more!
1/12/2009 c1 4melanintypist67
I love the story so far and i love the story Mistake. You have to update soon. PLZ!
4melanintypist67I love the story so far and i love the story Mistake. You have to update soon. PLZ!